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Metaphorically

I I Slip- into a dreamy dream- and I am falling into a greenforest lost in a sea of trees they are sobeautiful the drums of time cease clouds sail in the sky oh my life is weather-stained-sad I imagine myself a tree g r a c e f u l lost in a sea of beautifultrees swaying my roots are deep in the ground my branches reach up to the sun shining through the forest at night the sky is blackasink a riverflows like a stream lost in a sea of trees II I am tranquil and serene and the wind is whistling through my weeping leaves like violins echoing tears like rain falling f a l l i n g in autumn and I give up mysorrow all the colourful pain dances away III and I stand bare I wear a gown white and I sleep mybranchesfrozen in the spring I awaken to put on my gownofgreen emerald green and I raise my branches high and I am strength and I am courage in this dreamy dream of mine veiled _____________________ January 22, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/metaphorically Copyright Protected, 01-868-091-22 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Natural Metaphor sponsor, Jamie Pan, Judged 2017 Second Place Submitted into the Standard contest, Most Original sponsor, Juliet Ligon, Judged 05/23/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/31/2021 8:10:00 PM
Dear Constance, your poem is beautiful in its imagery and its formatting. Deep emotions and self-reflection flow gracefully though your amazing poem. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 6/1/2021 8:51:00 PM
Susan, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Constance! Your sporadic lines, squishedtogetherwords, and spaces made this unique to me.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:04:00 PM
Juliet, thank you for the contest and my placement and the congratulations and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 3:22:00 PM
WOW! Love this exceptional poem, Constance. Congratulations on your win in the Most Original Poetry Contest - most deserved. Your poem is superbly original! Love ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:05:00 PM
Mala, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance
Date: 1/25/2017 5:54:00 AM
A profound and amazing piece. Very deserving of your second placement. 7 Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance. Congrats on your win. I love your imagery. Agnes
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Date: 1/24/2017 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful, BW!!! ;-) You have a gift of breathing life into your words..... Congrats for your second placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:01:00 AM
Very creative writing, And enjoyable read. Congratulations, Constance /|\
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Date: 1/24/2017 10:04:00 AM
oh wow, amazing BW! loved this one, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:17:00 AM
A fabulous poem with beautiful descriptions. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:41:00 AM
A profound and amazing piece Constance! Very deserving of your second placement. Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/23/2017 3:34:00 PM
ohh, you did spin a waylaid image of nature mirroring a deeper allusion to one's self... beautiful, constance... huggs!
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