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written for the metamorphosis contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker,. On a migraine train to healing. I somehow wrote this anyhow. 

“blessings from above transformed lust to love delusion to illumination earth-heaven bilocation” - Unseeking Seeker
When rays of saffron atonement streak through the indigo skies, a glitter of dawn begins to break over the harsh steel night, and scents of strawberries waft through the crisp morning breeze. Sodden earth from misbegotten fights, yet sour memories still linger under my regretful fingernails. While I lift my unchained soul from the mists soaked in petrichor, brushing the crushed leaves from my silken hair. Now I walk toward the babbling spring, looking down at the sapphire pool of water below me. I no longer see the wrathful rage within my pale irises, nor do I feel the poison-dipped words coursing through my veins. But I remember how chamomile constellations were obscured and cocooned into a delicate chrysalis, while caterpillars crawled and crooned carols to the monstrous monsoon that serenaded maleficent monologues to throne a butterfly mind to a kingdom of deceit. So I surrender to the universe, unlock my heart to the elysian empyrean, praising the tulip twilight that unfurled wings of gold upon my fragile psyche, still seeking love amidst the eclipsed spheres that strangled the serenity within my crystalline conscience. O’ beloved almighty, forgive the blasphemous breeze that surrounded my bones and skin, when doubts and delusions sabotaged the chakras within. But I am no longer a prisoned marionette to the gallery of greed. I illustrate the amethyst zest, illuminating weeping wisterias, to a museum of spiritual awakening, fragranced with unfaltering fate. Transforming weakened willows into a valley of relentless roses, there, love is an immortal revelation, synchronized with unrestricted devotion; burying superficial desires, sprouting soothing sentiments, flourishing with ethereal zeal. Karma knows the initials of my faith, knitted with glistening bliss, in miraculous magnificence, revealing thriving elixirs. I relinquish the reveries of bougainvillea blessings, purified with peace lilies. Tonight, I’ll abandon the material magnets that pulled me into a lethal entanglement. I’ll count salt-soaked citrines scattered across galactic gardens in mindfulness, while waltzing through the astral fields, hypnotized by seraphic symphonies. Physically, hanging on electrified threads, I flutter my metamorphosed feathers, intoxicated by the charismatic credence of honeysuckle hymns. Cosmically, my thoughts swirl to the silver-sequined sagas, flowing in celestial beams, soaring in magical frequencies.

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Date: 1/22/2025 12:30:00 PM
What I talked about in email. This is your tenth trophy as I arrive toward the bottom of this first page of your poetry that is showing!! I am lucky if I have ONE. hahaha
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Date: 7/28/2024 6:18:00 PM
An exceptional masterpiece my dear poet friend Ink. I'll hugely fave this. I adore and love every soulful line you've creatively woven to make this a great masterpiece. Another Big Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 7/27/2024 7:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Empress!! Emotionally empowering. Congratulations on your well deserved fishing!!
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Date: 7/22/2024 11:07:00 PM
Another masterpiece dear friend. I feel lucky to read such great poetry from you here. Though I can never emulate your style, my mind gets bathed in the beauty and fragrance of your perfumed words. "But I am no longer a prisoned marionette to the gallery of greed. I illustrate the amethyst zest, illuminating weeping wisterias, to a museum of spiritual awakening " . When such a spiritual awakening happens in us, we will be able to flutter our "metamorphosed feathers, intoxicated by the charismatic credence of honeysuckle hymns." Such wonderful insights! No surprise you got the prestigious trophy win. Hearty Congratulations, sweet friend.
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Date: 7/22/2024 10:29:00 AM
huge cheers on your top win with this impressive piece, ink! blessed be...
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Date: 7/22/2024 9:35:00 AM
Great write.
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Date: 7/22/2024 7:18:00 AM
Big congrats, dear friend. You are in a roll!! I am so happy just to be on the list! Stunning imagery here!
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Date: 7/22/2024 6:21:00 AM
Well, well. Look who's winning contests left and right! This should shut the mouths of skeptics and haters, but in truth will likely only inspire more envy. You rock Inky! So glad you're here. I'd like to visit that museum of spiritual awakening. Sounds like fun
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Date: 7/22/2024 4:33:00 AM
This is just amazing, the picture it paints, the choice of words and how it knits your thoughts to reveal your deepest beliefs! I am surprised this did not win POTD! Congrats on your win! Brilliant write!
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Date: 7/18/2024 3:29:00 PM
"Tonight, I’ll abandon the material magnets that pulled me into a lethal entanglement. The self-awareness of this is an amazing channel to new strives and productivity. The mind, the heart, etc. we often doubt ourselves and by that doubting God. We forget that we are souls, spirit beings merely occupying a space that does not truly belong to us. "forgive the blasphemous breeze that surrounded my bones and skin, when doubts and delusions sabotaged the chakras within." And this has explained it.
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Date: 7/18/2024 3:33:00 PM
"Karma knows the initials of my faith" This is such a powerful line. It's an excellent thing to make sure our mistakes don't repeat itself and to understand that certain struggles emanate so we can learn from them. Each bridge we cross, a reflection of where we are coming from and where we aim to go. Excellent penning Dear, Ink. Best wishes for the contest.
Date: 7/18/2024 1:46:00 PM
It seems I am not the only one filled with warm feelings to you, about this. <3 Love the image of "crushed leaves" in your hair... Very beautiful- wishing you magic, love, and light,
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Date: 7/18/2024 11:44:00 AM
It's endearing how your poem opens with a beautiful depiction of dawn breaking through the night, symbolized by "rays of saffron atonement" piercing "indigo skies." This transition from darkness to light sets the tone for a journey from regret and sorrow towards healing and enlightenment. The sensory detail of "scents of strawberries" in the "crisp morning breeze" adds a tangible freshness and a sense of new beginnings. It is a clever way to express the butterfly effect from a cocoon state.. A clever idea for the contest, I am sure it will do really well.. BOL..
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Date: 7/18/2024 10:08:00 AM
When rays of saffron atonement streak through the indigo skies..oooh damn … chamomile constellations were obscured and cocooned into a delicate chrysalis… mmm the absolute elegance!!! valley of relentless roses, love is an immortal revelation, synchronized with unrestricted devotion… mmm the power in these lines are magnificent!!! salt-soaked citrines scattered across galactic gardens in mindfulness, oooo look at these alliterating lines flowww.. oooo the ending is amazing. soaring in magical frequencies. . this piece is pure magic
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Date: 7/18/2024 3:23:00 AM
earth-heaven bilocation” I have not doubt you do this every day of your life, when you write, girl, Love you
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Date: 7/18/2024 1:50:00 AM
Magical frequencies … Amazing as always
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