Metamorphosed

I see their intentions,
In their trances of manipulation, 
Mind-warping affection, they laid upon you, 
And knowingly you feed on what I thought you were absorbing…

You lash out at me screaming, saying,
“Rest your distrustful inflicting,
Look me in the eye, accept me, and free me!
I will consume their darkness in a bleeding light,
Whilst juggling in the enigmas you cramp me in!

You wonder why I welcome all,
As danger tickles my curves, arresting your nerves
You most sacred, superstitious little butterfly
Cease your incessant, mocking lectures
Flapping your wings at me in a colorful warning

Yes, I know you have seen it all you perfectly transformed worm!
I know what you know even though you think I do not know it!
Your metamorphosis of completion is impressive, yes,
Yet in your expectations, you ignore the fact that I am shapeless, 

Stepping into the open air to confront change with all of its surprises.”

My multihued resolve silenced her… 
“I hear you! I hear you oh so clear,
You innocent, raw little worm of a girl…
So I shall allow, just know:
My mighty wings are here to shade you, not smother you
As your guardian, I will trust with sting
Swearing on my every heartbeat,
I will protect you as you engorge on the thorns you call beauty
I will lift you from the brushes to let you peek at the hungry birds,
And you will plead for me to shield you once more
Though when I do not, and the birds dive down to consume you,
In fear, in haste, you will sprout your magnificent wings,
You will call out my name,
And in tears I will watch you fly far above them all!”

For Justin Bordner's contest, "The Instincts of Innocence"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Congrats, my friend! So happy for you! Wasn't able to join myself but seeing your name up there is more than enough for me. hugs!
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September 6, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Hmm--so we sort of know what is coming when a transformation takes place, but it is still remarkable. And, you make the conversation so volatile and allegorical. This can be about so much. How do you do it?
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September 6, 2015 at 4:51 PM
I love when you take in these poems so deeply. You're always a delight to me...you make me feel special. I write from the heart, and it just spills. ~Laura
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September 5, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Laura Breidenthal, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
Breidenthal Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Thanks, SKAT :} ~Laura
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September 4, 2015 at 3:37 AM
Wow incredible Laura! Ur work is awesome n deserves a top place undoubtedly! Big congrats!
Breidenthal Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Hello, Dr.Upma :) I really enjoyed writing this one.. thank you for reading.. ~Laura
Nunez Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Wow...another brilliant write, Laura. You always amaze with your firm grasp of the subject matter, my friend. A worthy contender for Justin's theme. Glad you came up already with yours...my muse is still in limbo...lol! hugs!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Hehe, can't wait to read yours, Kim! You're awesome! ~Laura
Manassian Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 3:31 PM
:) What a triumphant ending, my dear....What a triumphant ending. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Breidenthal Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Thanks!!! (: I'm really glad you liked the end. It lifted my heart writing that last line. I also reflected on parenthood, and God as well, toward the end- His powerful and loving ways, the ultimate guardian of my life personally...I was also inspired by a quote from one of my favorite movies, Les Miserables (starring Liam Neeson and Geoffrey Rush). Jean Vajean was sitting on the sickly and despondent Fantine's bed, as she began putting herself down for what she's become... he replied to her gently and lovingly, "you're His creation..in His eyes you've never been anything more but an innocent, beautiful woman." Your picture is beautiful btw, Eileen, very cute!! ~Laura
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August 22, 2015 at 2:30 AM
To test the wings of our truth, to know our growth through the gusto and gambit of our guardian is to feel the natural courage of freedom...this is what your awesome poem instills in my soul, and a poem must be personal for the reader, otherwise it has no purpose for the one who reads it, this applies to biopoetry too! You have a wonderful talent for composing poems that facilitates freedom in the hearts and minds of your readers Poetess...this one reason why I love you...J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Thanks love! Guardian love is so so godly. Your input is always spot on and very appreciated. I'm happy you enjoyed those lines.. I feel the last line is both heartbreaking and hopeful. Seeing those we have taught and protected for so long, leaving and experiencing whats in the chaotic world can be scary, but also it can be a time of celebrated joy and pride. Love always, Laura
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August 22, 2015 at 2:38 AM
"I will trust with sting, swearing on my every heartbeat, I will protect you as you engorge on the thorns you call beauty..." absolutely stunning quality in these metaphysical metaphors, telling that through danger and pain love will remain Laura...J.A.B.
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