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Been writing these rhymes for a while, imagination like quail man, keepin that Doug Funnie style I keep my world in my mind it can't be contained in a file, like My Cousin Vinny I blow you away when on trial I pick on the game all day like I'm Helga Patacki, the lines and rhymes work for me you can call them my lackeys I work hard at what I do you can never say that I'm slacking, my words dump sludge on the negative my own version of fracking When I write down these words I'm telling a story, like Sean Astin in Rudy I'm always striving for glory I'll be in the game old and gray just start callin' me Maury, still on the search for a partner you can just call me Dori Like the hero in Skyrim I'm on my own quest, to rid myself of negativity and get this **** off my chest I still have much to learn and I'm far from the best, but if this life is a final I think I'm passin' the test

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Date: 5/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
hahaha as long as im passin, ill skate by on a 65 :P and the references you didnt get were probly nerdy video game references :P so your in the clear with that one :)
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:38:00 AM
I think you are doin' alright, got a couple of refrences in there that I don't get, but the last line hit it irregardless of that. :-P
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Date: 5/27/2014 2:43:00 PM
hahaha as long as im passin, ill skate by on a 65 :P and the references you didnt get were probly nerdy video game references :P so your in the clear with that one :)----accidently left this as a comment to myself :P id say 65 sounds about right lol!!

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