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MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE My new friend, Your eyes pleasure my words. Hands fresh in a world unknown to me-- New in wonder and mysterious splendors With delight I greet you. Long flutters of time may have passed, But in days gone by I was a woman of steadfast heart. A soul with passion for life and those I love. I did not ‘go gently’ into the darkness. In this spirit, May I offer you advice. If you, in discouragement, Shall sometimes wander-- Find delight in things small-- The toothy smile of a child The memory of times lost The lingering kiss of a lover The embrace of a long absent friend Remember us— our luxurious foolishness, our craving for technology, our crushing intellect without remorse— Remember us With kindness. We loved We laughed We helped others when we could Or when convenient Cherish your world As we did not cherish ours Find possibilities in peace Adore each atom Celebrate each centimeter of your beloved’s body And, in small quiet moments Think of me And my blessings Afresh on you. Victoria Anderson-Throop Dec 10, 2012

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Date: 1/8/2013 2:41:00 PM
VICTORIA, , stopping by to say hi and read your winning poem in CATIE'S ""Message in a Bottle "'' contest~ nice poem to read. have yourself a good day. always & forever ~LINDA
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Date: 12/30/2012 5:31:00 PM
Congrad's on your beautiful winning thoughts. Light & Love
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Date: 12/29/2012 8:20:00 PM
Oh, so beautiful..congrats on a fine poem. BG
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Date: 12/29/2012 7:31:00 PM
Victoria, congrats ~SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2012 11:23:00 AM
wonderful poetry!! Glad to finally see this one and wish you a congratulations for your win.
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Date: 12/29/2012 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on you winning spot Victoria xx
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Date: 12/13/2012 8:27:00 AM
thank you for landing your bottle on my shores. It is touching and full of truth with that tinge of regret we all know so well. Love, Kathy
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