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Message In a Bottle

I loved I hated I laughed I cried I was dumb I was wise I was cruel I was kind I lived I died I was there I was here Long ago I was here... 12/8/2012 Catie's contest

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Carol Eastman

Date: 1/1/2013 11:39:00 AM

Amazing write... And in so few words... so much was said... I love your poems and how you write them.

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/26/2012 12:27:00 AM

Love this one Tim ......Seren

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/17/2012 7:39:00 PM

I love this, Tim...Life in a "nutshell"! I like the way you wrote yours...most often, 'less is better'. It should do well in Catie's contest! Thanks for your kind comment on "Loving You". I'm glad you liked it. Take care. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your family. Always, Annalise

Elaine George

Date: 12/17/2012 3:53:00 AM

Simply stated yet so powerful, Tim. I have been away from the soup for some time now - working on other writing projects. Tim, I thank you for your kind comments on my writing- they mean so much to me. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Elaine

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/10/2012 8:28:00 PM

Ah, what I like here is that what it means is how it is said. Simple. Life is as simple or as complex as one makes it, yes? Enjoyed this write! hugs, Cyndi