Message In a Bottle-Kiss-Sharon

Message in a bottle-Kiss-Sharon 



His love carried me throughout my life
Like this bottle on the ocean
Let it ebb and flow always
Should you find this bottle
Washing up on shore
please release it
to the sea
once more
kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/18/2011 10:46:00 AM
I love it Sharon, I hope there are directions in this bottle, nice one....:)
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Shar. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:52:00 AM
Very emotional write here Shar!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:41:00 AM
Super congratulations for this win dear friend.
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:25:00 PM
Sharon this is so lovely, I adore it, congrats on your win~~
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Date: 3/7/2011 2:19:00 PM
The eternal sea will carry your love forever, Sharon. A beautiful nonet. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2011 2:19:00 PM
A very well deserved win, Shar - and thanks for your nice message : ) Jack
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Date: 3/7/2011 7:59:00 AM
Super sweet message you have here-- of enduring love-- Super congrats on the2nd place win, Shar :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:30:00 AM
Sharon, congratulations on your 2nd place win in Linda's contest with this gem ;) love Wilma
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:08:00 AM
Wow very powerful message here. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:42:00 PM
This is a well deserved win, Sharon! congratulations.
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:27:00 PM
So great to see you at the top in this one Sharon. Congratulations on your worthy second place honored poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:47:00 PM
breathless, sharon... a crown for you for the big win in this tiurney!) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:18:00 PM
Hey Shar, Congratulations on your very fine 2nd place win in Linda's Contest. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Sharon
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:55:00 PM
Congrats my dear Shar!!!! a wondeful piece and win for you..love Michael
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congrats Shar on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your support...
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:03:00 AM
This is so beautiful Sharon. Harry
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:38:00 PM
A warming beautiful write. a winner and heart felt write.... I love it!!! love Michael
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:57:00 AM
Nice message in a bottle, Sharon
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:20:00 AM
whoo, my heart spins with such sensation, sharon.. just did mine as wel! drop by if you can and let's share notes!! this is a fave of mine for linda's tourney.. winning wishes..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/4/2011 7:57:00 AM
wow, I love how you did yours. Making it an endless message of love. I hope it scores BIG
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:26:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Shar.. good luck luv.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece ..happy weekend my friend...
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