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Message In a Bottle-Kiss-Sharon

Message in a bottle-Kiss-Sharon His love carried me throughout my life Like this bottle on the ocean Let it ebb and flow always Should you find this bottle Washing up on shore please release it to the sea once more kiss

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James Fraser

Date: 4/18/2011 10:46:00 AM

I love it Sharon, I hope there are directions in this bottle, nice one....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Shar. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 8:52:00 AM

Very emotional write here Shar!Congrats on your big win!!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/8/2011 12:41:00 AM

Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Constance La France

Date: 3/7/2011 3:25:00 PM

Sharon this is so lovely, I adore it, congrats on your win~~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 2:19:00 PM

The eternal sea will carry your love forever, Sharon. A beautiful nonet. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2011 2:19:00 PM

A very well deserved win, Shar - and thanks for your nice message : ) Jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 7:59:00 AM

Super sweet message you have here-- of enduring love-- Super congrats on the2nd place win, Shar :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 3:30:00 AM

Sharon, congratulations on your 2nd place win in Linda's contest with this gem ;) love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:08:00 AM

Wow very powerful message here. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2011 6:42:00 PM

This is a well deserved win, Sharon! congratulations.

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 5:27:00 PM

So great to see you at the top in this one Sharon. Congratulations on your worthy second place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 3:47:00 PM

breathless, sharon... a crown for you for the big win in this tiurney!) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 3:18:00 PM

Hey Shar, Congratulations on your very fine 2nd place win in Linda's Contest. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Sharon

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2011 12:55:00 PM

Congrats my dear Shar!!!! a wondeful piece and win for you..love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 12:09:00 PM

Congrats Shar on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your support...

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/5/2011 5:03:00 AM

This is so beautiful Sharon. Harry

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/4/2011 1:38:00 PM

A warming beautiful write. a winner and heart felt write.... I love it!!! love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/4/2011 10:57:00 AM

Nice message in a bottle, Sharon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2011 8:20:00 AM

whoo, my heart spins with such sensation, sharon.. just did mine as wel! drop by if you can and let's share notes!! this is a fave of mine for linda's tourney.. winning wishes..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 7:57:00 AM

wow, I love how you did yours. Making it an endless message of love. I hope it scores BIG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:26:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Shar.. good luck luv.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of the piece ..happy weekend my friend...