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Mesmeric Mind

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darkened deserts dry phantom psyches proudly pry mindless multiply Jan.28.2020 Senryu on Mind Poetry Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/6/2020 6:34:00 AM

Your alliteration itself! Congrats, WW!

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2020 1:12:00 PM

WW, congratulations on your win with this excellent senryu _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2020 4:16:00 AM

- Congratulations W.W. on a wonderful 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2020 3:12:00 PM

I remember this and really liking it. congrats on great win!

Lu Loo

Date: 2/4/2020 9:03:00 AM

how gentle flowing...congrats sweet WW! x:-)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/3/2020 11:43:00 PM

Fantastic alliteration.. Congrats on your great win Wingster..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2020 10:12:00 AM

Clever expression of your observation. Thanx for your visit

Maria Williams

Date: 1/30/2020 9:29:00 PM

Saying it in Senryu, as only you can my Wingster friend. Good luck on this winner of a poem....Maria Hugs

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/30/2020 1:34:00 AM

Indeed...I enjoyed your poem and the messages within.