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Mermaids

When the moon rises Stirring from their trance Somewhere between heaven and earth The night creatures come alive Roaring rolling seas of fantasy Glistening waves under starry skies Bewitching dancers of the night Enchanting sensuous hypnotic eyes Shameless graceful temptresses In a tireless motion of seduction The moon the stars the sailors All fair game AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on June 20, 2018 for contest LATE JUNE 2018 STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and January 2, 2018 for contest WATER AND SKY sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN

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Date: 6/23/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful as always.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 5:42:00 PM
I love the last line, all fair game, guess they don't stand a chance with the song of the mermaid Line, I really enjoyed your winning poem, Congrats
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie.
Date: 6/21/2018 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, beautifully written poem. :))
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations Line on your marvelous win xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Line. // Warren
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Warren. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, Line. Very nice.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Dale. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 2:16:00 AM
Congratulations Line Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2018 12:41:00 AM
beautiful, they seem very real thru these eyes
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, Virginia. Of course mermaids are real. LOL

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