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unrhymed tercets 

Listening to the grasshoppers beat singing enchants in the long grass you never heard the ache breaking playing into a heartfelt song silence holds beauty still As I watch Lord of the flies hover and dance merrily side to side crying into a hellish place bewildered playing the fiddle begins lament Rainbows shines on it's wings golden delicious promise glistens In your colours bouquet lustre radiant highlights invade space tortured burns alone in a pale moon face smiling eclipse born tonight circle halo crowning of the skull golden paradise leaving skeleton behind Standing I see mother of pearl alluring Queen dressed in white sweetly painted gracious songs dance to the flute cobra bites floating in the silver lining colours supreme being held captive Your footprints of love forever will remain true as tides turn slowly in an ocean filled space where the seagulls cry touching down gently warmly a piper fish plays with undercurrents deeply combing grace Lost in the ocean fish waves turn and whisper delicately on a tail waves softly in one breeze rustling flip hair back spirit of thought touching the brow caught in a net seeking joy

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Date: 8/6/2016 11:47:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Date: 8/2/2016 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful magical imagery ;)
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Date: 8/1/2016 5:39:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/1/2016 4:45:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Liam - Love it! - Best wishes and warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2016 4:41:00 PM
The pov was right on. I loved the write.
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