Merlin the Wiz Kid

410 AD when mythology takes hold
Barbarians threaten to conquer Rome
Roman troops abandon Britain, head home
But Chieftain Vortigern seizes the throne

Britain’s new king sought to flex his power
Mt. Snowden’s site chosen for his tower
But before Vortigern builders cowered
Ever-crumbling walls left his face sour

Soothsayers were beckoned and wove a tale
A fatherless boy must be brought to Wales
His blood be shed and his future curtailed
If hopes for the tower were to prevail

A princess was said to have spawned an heir
Whose father had simply vanished in air
Leaving the single mother in despair
And the ghost’s voice she still heard she declared

Her son Merlin was brought before the king
Vortigern scowled when he began laughing
Merlin said ‘neath the tower lay a spring
That’s why its unsettled walls kept crumbling

He claimed serpents were below ground as well
The king quickly fell under the boy’s spell
Diggers found both as the lad did foretell
Merlin’s life spared, his reputation swelled

To escape wrath from a king with clout
The tower’s real problem this boy figured out
The “magician” name he could do without
But a sharp wiz kid was Merlin, no doubt



*Friends, I did extensive research on Merlin 
and this is what I learned.  Is the story true? 
 Yes, to the best of my knowledge.  
Vortigern was a true character and this is 
allegedly how he discovered Merlin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/16/2011 2:11:00 PM
Lovely informative piece, Carolyn. I love reading about Arthur and Merlin, but I've certainly learnt a thing or two here!
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:45:00 AM
I loved this awesome tale Carolyn. You have beautifully penned it. Many congrats.
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:16:00 PM
congrats Carolyn, excellent as always, if i didn't know, i'd swear you were from the old country, i see from the comments "Magic" seems to be the buzz word for this, i would have to agree with that, Magic sheer Magic. Harry
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:15:00 PM
I always loved merlin, fine write for the contest I wish you all the best and many more wins luv ~Virginia
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:39:00 AM
congratulations on your win with this well written piece Carolyn!
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:10:00 AM
Wow, Great write. Merlin's Tale has been told in many ways, He's one of my favorite characters , and you did him justice with this fine piece.
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your research Carolyn. Real or not, Merlin is a fascinating character. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:55:00 AM
mystical poem for the new year.
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Date: 12/31/2010 10:27:00 AM
Kool capture on the story of Merlin Carolyn. The stories of him have sure made for great movies....:)
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:19:00 PM
glad to hear of the research you did for this one. Made it sound all the more impressive, Carolyn!
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Date: 12/30/2010 11:27:00 AM
Well, don't know if this is from history or if it is about the wizard Merlin that is in the tales that youth are reading now..Interesting work though..I am glad that I stoppped this afternoon..Your presence at my work was a blessing..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:36:00 AM
I didn't know Merlin & Co were in any way real historical figures.....but I enjoyed this learnin g experience....well done on your win Carolyn...you are a gifted poet.....sincerely Syd
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:55:00 PM
So was this in the original legend, Carolyn or did you use your creative mind to produce it? I had not heard of this part of the legend! Great telling of it, Carolyn. and congratulations on your great win! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 2:33:00 PM
This was a terrific read and a well deserved win Carolyn.Have a wonderful and Happy New Year.Luv your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:44:00 PM
Do you know the song by the Moody Blues - "Are You sitting Comfortably? It is about "Merlin"and the lyrics read"Are you sitting comfortably? Let Merlin cast his spell". Nice bit of history in you poem. Look foward to getting your book. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Paula Swanson's "Just Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:08:00 PM
So interesting to read the legends and myths about Merlin. Very unique to tell it literary. Congratulations, Carolyn on your 3rd place win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:55:00 PM
You never cease to amaze me. I love history as I told you before. This one was "spell" binding. Lots of pictures went through my mind as I read it. A beautiful piece. Lots of Love, ~Misty~
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:38:00 PM
Just beautiful. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:53:00 PM
TOTALLY MAGICAL! I loved it!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:36:00 PM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your well deserved win. I dunno about magigicians but I do believe in magic. Enjoyed this one to the max. Love, Will
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!! promise to catch up on your work been busy working through our Blizzard here in NY...love Michael
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win! I loved this the first time I read it. Great job! Way to go! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/28/2010 11:17:00 AM
Carolyn, super congratulations on your win in the contest.. Blessings to you, love Wilma
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