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Author’s Notes: “Meretricious Spirit” is a Didactic write I completed on October 11, 2016. I consider this one to be a rather straight-forward narrative. It both says what it means and means what it says. This particular theme was one that had been in the back of my mind for a while. I believe that most of us, if not all of us, have been in certain meretricious-like situations with other people, when some them are less-than-authentic and present themselves, at times, in accordance with certain negative attitudes or behaviors reflected by: pretense, deception, vulgarity, insincerity, unfounded bias, childishness, and superficiality – to name a few. And there are certainly others that could be added to this list as well. I believe my teaching point here with this Didactic is principally captured by the following three verses (Verses 13-15) in this poem: “Always follow your life’s passion and / the spiritual heart and tenor of your soul / for they shall be your true moral compass.” At least, this is my take, when I ponder some of the rather unique situations and circumstances we can all find ourselves in from time-to-time with other people when we’re confronted, unfortunately, by some of these less-than-savory aspects of human nature and behavior. Something to think about! (Gary Bateman – October 22, 2016) (Didactic)

Categories: betrayal, emotions, feelings, hurt, prejudice, rude, and vanity.

Meretricious Spirit This spirit is modern society’s cancer Replete with rank, flashy vulgarities Pervading our social fabric and soul Unbridled, unbowed, unapologetic; It can be a curse to mankind itself Engulfing some people in moments Of childish deception and insincerity Which challenge our human civility; Petulance, at times, can be seen to “Rule the Roost” in certain personal Interactions to make each of us seem To be less than who we truly are in life; Always follow your life’s passion and The spiritual heart and tenor of your soul, For they shall be your true moral compass As you face the daily slings and arrows of This life as mankind’s fabulistic tendencies Seek to tarnish one’s very spirit and worth In this thing we all call—our mortal coil! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, October 11, 2016 (Didactic)

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Date: 10/25/2016 6:52:00 PM
Gary, I just now got to reading this one. Outstanding! I have always believed a life fully lived is a life lived authentically and following purpose true to your soul.
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Date: 10/28/2016 6:51:00 AM
Hello Heidi!! And thanks for your spot-on comments here. Living authentically and following the light and purpose of one's soul are indeed so very important. Glad you liked this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/24/2016 8:15:00 PM
Hi Gary, I agree,this is a straight forward type of write. As always you delivered it's message very well. Great job-7:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/25/2016 4:56:00 PM
Hello Dear Alexis!! I'm glad you found this Didactic and its particular message to be of interest. This one does reflect my view of on how I look at the state of mankind, as it is, in today's modern world. Definite food for thought!! Thanks for the "7" too!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/24/2016 6:25:00 PM
you have touched the truth in every aspect of this pen excellent piece and the notes sang it to a higher level gary passing you a warm smile pal
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/25/2016 4:57:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Thanks for your golden pen comments. Always most appreciated on my end!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 10/23/2016 5:59:00 AM
- Yes, really something to think about Gary - Great written and an important topic - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday and a great new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Dear Anne-Lise for your greetings and note!! And best greetings to you and your family too!! The theme I touched on in this Didactic is actually something I don't take lightly. This type of attitude-behavior does greatly affect the quality and meaningfulness of the kind of discourse we have modern societies today. I guess, in this sense, I'm kind of a traditionalist about good manners and appropriate behavior. Anyway, I'm pleased you liked this write. I also think that poets should speak out at times on issues that deal with some of the outrageous follies and vanities that negatively affect mankind. Best Wishes Always, Gary

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