Merciful Heaven

Sister Benedictine, her blinded eyes stretched upward,
seeing neither blue nor green
nor his mercy.

born into a religious family, expected
at fourteen, to kindle providence…

she’d flounder at best.
   her neophyte gown, dark and drab,
   long nights without prospect.

her grin grew as she noticed Father Francis,
the poetic bombast of his tongue.
   the bored hunch of his shoulders.

together they’d let go of their latent inhibition,
invisible to the church,
except for one peeping eye.

Faith saw it — the lecherous act. the smolder of
her right spectacle ignited the steeple.

the overwrought mother of
the excommunicated sister
coldly calls her
by her middle name, Dolorous —

for she was promised to God
during the painful pangs of birth.

locked into a wretched wheelchair,
the mother stares into her child’s eyes —
mean green and steel blue, unglued.

6/9/2019

Eight word free verse challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

*Merciful Heaven - an exclamation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Kim, such a deserved win - congratulations on a very fine poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 12:28 PM
A powerful write indeed Kim, thanks for your entry and congrats on another fine win!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thanks so much, John!
Krutsinger Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Wow, Kim. Wow! Wow! Wow! A powerful write, my friend. WOW!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Thanks so much, dear Caren! Hugs...Kim
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Wonderfully done and a surprise ending
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, Allen! :)
Rose  Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Mercifully so, but I got shivers at the end of your poem Kim, gl in the contest, well written xo
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, Pixie!
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