Merciful Heaven

Sister Benedictine, her blinded eyes stretched upward,
seeing neither blue nor green
nor his mercy.

born into a religious family, expected
at fourteen, to kindle providence…

she’d flounder at best.
   her neophyte gown, dark and drab,
   long nights without prospect.

her grin grew as she noticed Father Francis,
the poetic bombast of his tongue.
   the bored hunch of his shoulders.

together they’d let go of their latent inhibition,
invisible to the church,
except for one peeping eye.

Faith saw it — the lecherous act. the smolder of
her right spectacle ignited the steeple.

the overwrought mother of
the excommunicated sister
coldly calls her
by her middle name, Dolorous —

for she was promised to God
during the painful pangs of birth.

locked into a wretched wheelchair,
the mother stares into her child’s eyes —
mean green and steel blue, unglued.

6/9/2019

Eight word free verse challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

*Merciful Heaven - an exclamation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 6/21/2019 1:41:00 PM
Kim, such a deserved win - congratulations on a very fine poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/21/2019 12:28:00 PM
A powerful write indeed Kim, thanks for your entry and congrats on another fine win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 6/9/2019 11:37:00 PM
Wow, Kim. Wow! Wow! Wow! A powerful write, my friend. WOW!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Caren! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/9/2019 11:21:00 PM
Wonderfully done and a surprise ending
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Allen! :)
Date: 6/9/2019 3:04:00 PM
Mercifully so, but I got shivers at the end of your poem Kim, gl in the contest, well written xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie!
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