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Hopefully this makes you grin a bit lol

Menacing Garden



My garden plots my demise 
Haunts me like a living soul
The care I give is appreciated, yet expected
Each time I weed takes a toll

When it's time to prune
All hell breaks loose
The clods grow stones to throw and wound
The ears of corn hear all that I say
They stalk me, following every which way
The sly potatoes sprout eyes to spy
And the others sharpen their spears to slay. 

As I sweat with tools through the rows and rows
I hear the whispered names they call
I know the slang they use , ( crying, "hoe!")
 Meaning a loose woman and I'm appalled !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 12:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Yes, it did make me smile...  Blessings on this Fall day, enjoy it in your garden...........
Woods Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Yay so glad! Xo
One Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Now this could be a metaphor for several things lol... Gardening can be difficult sometimes when the weeds are overgrown and the lawn has not been mowed in while....
Woods Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Right?!... thanks for stopping by! Xo
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