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Men You Definitely Wouldn'T Want To Date - Part 2

I once dated a chef … I was worried about getting a bun in the oven But when I saw him mincing across the kitchen I knew I wouldn’t be getting my fingers burned! I once dated a fireman… Oh he was HOT HOT HOT But when he got out his tiny hose It soon put out the flames of my desire I once dated an electrician .. Hoping that he would light up my life But he was short tempered and would quickly blow a fuse Sadly in the end there was no spark between us I once dated a plumber… I was flushed with pride when we were out together Sadly he had problems with his waterworks I ditched him… he was always taking a leak I once dated a bricklayer Couldn’t resist pointing out my faults He wouldn’t listen, it was like talking to a brick wall In the end he drove me up the wall and our relationship crumbled 15th April 2016

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/28/2016 12:39:00 AM

These are really amazing 'mini tale's that are LoL funny in a way that brings the humour to the 'occupation' not the 'men', which is both respecful and hilarious...no easy feat, you just make it look easy with your extraordinary talent :-) Excellent writing Jan...I'm off to #1 now..I did it backwards..lol blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Lynn I had such fun writing these silly poems about certain occupations ... I think there is still scope for part 4 lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 4/21/2016 6:37:00 AM

Glad you got rid of the fireman Little hoses never work These are just so much fun Loved my visit. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2016 6:39:00 AM

LOL Mama Bear - all fiction just for fun lol:-) :-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 4/16/2016 7:39:00 AM

...and of course I had to read part two. You've left me smiling.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2016 8:44:00 AM

Many thanks James:-)hugs Jan xx

Theresa Cw

Date: 4/16/2016 1:14:00 AM

Ha haha!! This is sure one heck of a fun one Jan, You sure have one funny kind of mind. I also love the first two like Andrea. Hilarious woman and friend you are. big Huggs // Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2016 4:32:00 AM

LOL Theresa - if I can make someone smile with my poems that is the most important thing:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/15/2016 7:38:00 PM

This is so so good, one of the best I have read recently! Hugs!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2016 4:31:00 AM

Thanks my friend I do appreciate all your support:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2016 6:53:00 PM

where did you get this awesome idea from to do cliches with professions like this. So COOL. Loved the first two here. So hilarious. and talking to a wall!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2016 4:31:00 AM

I have no idea where the inspiration came from Andrea - I think the thought of the book is helping me to be creative - am so pleased people are enjoying my poems and I'm making them smile:-) I love the thought of the chef 'mincing' lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/15/2016 6:43:00 PM

G'day Jan ... very good Jan. You could have tried a carpenter but he could have given you saws - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2016 4:29:00 AM

ha ha ha - I keep getting suggestions for more occupations:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2016 6:18:00 PM

Lol...Love it Jan... I was waiting for when you dated a poet....hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 6:20:00 PM

LOL - I keep being given suggestions for more occupations lol:-) hugs Jan xx I am working on one from a man's point of view now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/15/2016 5:02:00 PM

lol...these are great Jan...pick your dates wisely...someone suggested scuba diver

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 5:03:00 PM

lol - I wonder who that could have been lol - next one I am working on is from the men's point of view lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/15/2016 4:45:00 PM

Jan, all these were great and fun to read, my dad used to say about me, that if there was a loser in the crowd I would find him, I went through some real losers till I got my prize , 7 ~

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 4:48:00 PM

aww that made me feel so sad when you found him and then lost him:-( hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2016 3:49:00 PM

Back then in my teens I mean,., Lol : )

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/15/2016 11:02:00 PM

: )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 3:58:00 PM

True story .. I had a friend Ian his brother was a fireman - I said to him that I'd always wanted to slide down a fireman's pole ... I won't tell you want his answer was... but it wasn't exactly what I had in mind lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2016 3:47:00 PM

I would have loved to date a fireman..Hot Hot : ) Big smiles.... Im loving it : )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 3:56:00 PM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/15/2016 2:30:00 PM

thank you for continuing with these adorable and totally delightful little ditties, jan! i am absolutely crazy about them. you are so creative and clever...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 2:33:00 PM

Aww thanks Ilene - what a co- incidence ... i have just commented on your poem this very minute lol:-) I'm working on a poem of 'women that men wouldn't want to date' now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/15/2016 2:15:00 PM

Jan, would you like to take a rude boat with me somewhere? LOL Typos are killing me. Love your humor. Peace sweet lady:)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 2:21:00 PM

ha ha ha - I guess it would depend on what your occupation is Daniel lol:-) hugs jan xx

Luke Irwin

Date: 4/15/2016 1:29:00 PM

I liked parts 1 and 2. Good fun, well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2016 1:35:00 PM

Many thanks Luke I had fun with these:-) hugs jan xx