David Hyatt-Bickle Poet Free verse

Men of Cold Steel

Men of freezing and silver steel                                                                                                                           Burning souls crying within them                                                                                                               Prowling to make life freeze and burn                                                                                                                      Like what the Ancients did to them




Original poem: The Phobos
Date: 2nd September 2021
Name of contest: Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest

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Paulette Calasibetta November 9, 2021 at 6:28 AM Congratulations on your win….quite a thought provoking piece. Blessings, Paulette

Beata Agustin November 1, 2021 at 8:01 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Michelle Faulkner November 1, 2021 at 5:32 PM So stark and primitive, especially like your closing lines, congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2021 at 11:44 AM Congrats on your awesome win, David

Constance La France November 1, 2021 at 6:36 AM David, wonderful lines and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Francis J Grasso October 31, 2021 at 5:58 AM Congratulations on your win, David! Well done. ...Fran

John Lusardi October 31, 2021 at 12:37 AM Well, made me feel primal, opens up some images from a vague cloudy past. Set out as in a style i really enjoy. Well done,

Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2021 at 7:07 PM Nicely done, David - I enjoyed all the layers here, and the stark truth of its message - congratulations on your second-place in the Liberum Divisa 7 Contest! Blessings! - the bard Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2021 at 7:08 PM NO other comments?!? Let me just say that's absurd, (but something I deal with as well - you must have the same disease I do, lol).