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Men of Cold Steel

Men of freezing and silver steel Burning souls crying within them Prowling to make life freeze and burn Like what the Ancients did to them Original poem: The Phobos Date: 2nd September 2021 Name of contest: Liberum Divisa 7 Poetry Contest

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/9/2021 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win….quite a thought provoking piece. Blessings, Paulette

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/1/2021 8:01:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/1/2021 5:32:00 PM

So stark and primitive, especially like your closing lines, congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 11:44:00 AM

Congrats on your awesome win, David

Constance La France

Date: 11/1/2021 6:36:00 AM

David, wonderful lines and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/31/2021 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, David! Well done. ...Fran

John Lusardi

Date: 10/31/2021 12:37:00 AM

Well, made me feel primal, opens up some images from a vague cloudy past. Set out as in a style i really enjoy. Well done,

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/30/2021 7:07:00 PM

Nicely done, David - I enjoyed all the layers here, and the stark truth of its message - congratulations on your second-place in the Liberum Divisa 7 Contest! Blessings! - the bard

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2021 7:08:00 PM

NO other comments?!? Let me just say that's absurd, (but something I deal with as well - you must have the same disease I do, lol).