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turning back the pages of my life I remember that spring day long ago when, I was a young girl and had a pretty new red dress with a hat that had a red dotted ribbon and was given five red fat dotted balloons I recall the joy of running through a wildflower field with my precious balloons bouncing and following the Queen Anne Lace buttercups and daises tickled my legs but who cared I had red dotted balloons ... for days I took care of them was very careful to not burst them then, one morning they lay flat and I cried until Mom came and blew them up again but, of course, eventually they faded away, as balloons do ... ____________________ February 04, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/Memory of Red Balloons Copyright Protected, ID 02-1523-336-04 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Balloons sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 03/02/2023 Third Place

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Date: 3/3/2023 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I love the Queen Anne Lace flowers. It has been many years since I last saw them. Have a blessed day......................
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2023 8:50:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations ad the compliment, we have tons of Queen Anne Lace, here in Canada, they are considered a wildflower. I love them too, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2023 5:45:00 AM
"they faded away, as balloons do ..." - Touching line. Such a beautiful poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:51:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, I love that line too, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/5/2023 7:40:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading this sweetest balloon poem. A win for me :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/6/2023 7:47:00 AM
Fin, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 2/5/2023 2:00:00 AM
Lovely penning Constance, bringing back great memories of these red balloons. Blessings,Gordon
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Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2023 2:12:00 AM
Gordon, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings Constance

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