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turning back the pages of my life 
     I remember
          that spring day long ago
   when, I was a young girl 
and had a pretty new red dress 
         with a hat that had a red dotted ribbon
    and was given five red fat dotted balloons
                        I recall the joy
          of running through a wildflower field
     with my precious balloons bouncing and following
                    the Queen Anne Lace
           buttercups and daises tickled my legs
                                   but who cared
                     I had red dotted balloons ...  
for days I took care of them
                       was very careful to not burst them
            then, one morning they lay flat 
                         and I cried
   until Mom came and blew them up again
                           but, of course,
           eventually they faded away, as balloons do ...

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February 04, 2023


Poetry/Free Verse/Memory of Red Balloons
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1523-336-04
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Balloons
sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 03/02/2023

Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/3/2023 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I love the Queen Anne Lace flowers. It has been many years since I last saw them. Have a blessed day......................
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2023 8:50:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations ad the compliment, we have tons of Queen Anne Lace, here in Canada, they are considered a wildflower. I love them too, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2023 5:45:00 AM
"they faded away, as balloons do ..." - Touching line. Such a beautiful poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:51:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, I love that line too, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/5/2023 7:40:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading this sweetest balloon poem. A win for me :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/6/2023 7:47:00 AM
Fin, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 2/5/2023 2:00:00 AM
Lovely penning Constance, bringing back great memories of these red balloons. Blessings,Gordon
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Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2023 2:12:00 AM
Gordon, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings Constance

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