Memory Loss

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Had a bad headache last night...
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I wake up now and the time is bright
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Get dressed, no time for breakfast
I'm needed at investigations by request
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A girl was killed, in the early a.m's
One thing I hate about this job, is seeing the dead
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Young woman, brunette, in her late 20's
Go through her files and see her profile picture
O god, I know her...she works in the cafe
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Thought she was cute, wanted to ask her out one day
...Guess I'll never get the chance to do so
I always seemed to forget her name
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My colleagues pull me aside and ask me to answer
My anger is brimming; why am I under question?
They say they new I liked her, and would be here once a week
But that doesn't mean I did this to her: felt like I was on repeat
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But you must know something, they ask
You were out with her last night
I looked at them as if they were crazy
...No...that isn't right
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They both turned and sighed and said they had no choice
The bullet matches my gun and my semen's in her voice
We've worked together a long time, beginning to be friends
But this crime you have committed, is going to cost you your end
...NO...THIS CAN'T BE RIGHT; I grab my gun and I hold it tight
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Stop it! they yell, do not hesitate
It is all already to late, just hand us your gun and give us your plate
There's no way, I cry, I look up for a moment and search to the sky
Inching near me, I jolt up my hand, don't get closer!
...O...wait...I do remember...her name was Betty: BANG!!!
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Had bad headache last night...

I wake up now and the time is bright...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/14/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Jessica. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Jessica on your win in Nikko's fine contest with this clever poetry >> James
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:37:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved rhythmic write, Jessica
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:02:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your big win in the Twist and Shock contest with another exceptional write and win.. enjoy another momentous victory ...happy weekend..wtih luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:32:00 AM
Wow. SUSPENSE!!! Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:23:00 AM
Hi Jessica!! I really thought a guy wrote this suspenseful piece! Awesome piece! Loved how you kept repeating those numbers-- definitely added to the suspense! Super congrats on your 4th place win!! -- nikko :)
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