Memory

...that builds its scaffolding within
neuro-rivulets
brain tidy 
or caught in random whims
to form a sense of self

memory, where it resides
                with packed up boxes of old photos
sometimes in mistakes made
                     that rub me the wrong way
                     like the gray torn threads of frozen seams

no microscope needed
recalling
a spring of sprawling promises
in a stubbled field where lovers once cooed

memory tousled like skipping ropes abandoned 
or in your grandmother's hands craddling tea
fitting thoughts of tip-toed dancing
or childhood blips of snatching snowflakes
                                     on tongues and lashes

sometimes the shoes it wears are boots in war song blues
or slippers that breeze through rosebud dreams
                             sleighs down hills
                             and sugar apples at Halloween

beyond the frame of what has ceased
memories like rock yokes about our necks
                   or the morning bread on which to feast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Layne Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations Brian. I like the concrete images in your poem. Well penned again!
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April 13, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Thanks very much Trina, for your stop by and for your thoughtful supportive message. Best wishes always. Brian
Messina Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Hey Brian, hope all is well, my friend. Thought I'd pick one of your poems out of the blue. Glad I found this one. Great take on memories...like the gray torn threads on frozen seams. Great lines here. Cheers Charlie
Messina Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Oh Geez, Brian. I am so sorry for all your losses. You've had a terrible year so I completely understand why you had kind have lost your will to write. Hopefully you will again write, if not that's okay too, but just know that you will be in my prayers my friend. If you need to talk, you can reach out to me brother. Be well and put that weight back on. All the best. Charlie
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November 20, 2024 at 7:25 PM
Hello Charles Thanks very much for your message. I hope that you are well. Tough year for me with 2 aunts passing and my beloved mother losing her will to live. Mum died late August. I caught pneumococcal pneumonia from mum, fell, had shoulder surgery caught Covid. Depression a given. I need to write again and recover my 20 pounds lost. May all good things come your way. Brian
Callus Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 11:07 AM
A most enjoyable trip down memory lane, Brian. The older I get, the more such trips I take! ~ Regards // paul
Sambourne Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Thanks very much, Paul, for your stop by + supportive note. Best wishes, Brian
Campanella Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Loads of imagery, -I liked - memory tousled like skipping ropes abandoned or in your grandmother's hands craddling tea fitting thoughts of tip-toed dancing or childhood blips of snatching snowflakes on tongues and lashes
Sambourne Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 6:11 AM
My appreciation for your message, Perry. I am glad that you found merit in my posting. Best wishes, Brian
Narain Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Nice poem and a great win.
Sambourne Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Jay, for your thoughtful drop by + note. Be well. Brian
Goldsmith Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Have a great day with your win......................
Sambourne Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Greetings Paula, You are so right - good, uplifting memories are the best to hold. Thank you for the supportive message. Cheers, Brian
Alex Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 9:12 PM
Indeed, a great work. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Many thanks Christuraj, for your congratulatory note. Be well. Brian
Radice Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Hi Brian. Before I read your reply to Anaya's comments I recognized the 'Rosebud' reference..the name on the sledge in CK (I took this in the film to be him remembering on his deathbed a time in his life which marked his end of innocence) Your poem has many layers - like the film itself. Oh, and I heard Julie Andrews singing in there too. :) Wonderful stuff Brian. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:31 PM
Hi Gary, You are one sharp, savvy reader (+poet). I never know whether to explain slightly concealed references in my postings or not. Youth may not be familiar with the Orson Welles' film. "These are a Few of My Favorite Things" certainly resonates loosely. I feel the posting requires more polish. Thank you again, Gary, for your unwavering support. Be well. Sincerely. Brian
Anaya Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Enjoyed all of your random whims, blips on recalling memories, some profound and others whimsy!
Sambourne Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:42 PM
Charles Kane was certainly a business magnate. Your reference to "Suits" is well suited. Cheers, Brian
Anaya Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Ah the magnate, above my pay grade! I just finished "Suits" does that count?
Sambourne Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Hi Anaya, Many thanks for your stop by and supportive message. The "rosebud dreams" allude to "Citizen Kane" - one of my favorite films. I hope your summer goes well. Brian
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