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...that builds its scaffolding within neuro-rivulets brain tidy or caught in random whims to form a sense of self memory, where it resides with packed up boxes of old photos sometimes in mistakes made that rub me the wrong way like the gray torn threads of frozen seams no microscope needed recalling a spring of sprawling promises in a stubbled field where lovers once cooed memory tousled like skipping ropes abandoned or in your grandmother's hands craddling tea fitting thoughts of tip-toed dancing or childhood blips of snatching snowflakes on tongues and lashes sometimes the shoes it wears are boots in war song blues or slippers that breeze through rosebud dreams sleighs down hills and sugar apples at Halloween beyond the frame of what has ceased memories like rock yokes about our necks or the morning bread on which to feast

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Date: 7/28/2023 11:07:00 AM
A most enjoyable trip down memory lane, Brian. The older I get, the more such trips I take! ~ Regards // paul
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/28/2023 7:09:00 PM
Thanks very much, Paul, for your stop by + supportive note. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 7/25/2023 12:15:00 AM
Loads of imagery, -I liked - memory tousled like skipping ropes abandoned or in your grandmother's hands craddling tea fitting thoughts of tip-toed dancing or childhood blips of snatching snowflakes on tongues and lashes
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/25/2023 6:11:00 AM
My appreciation for your message, Perry. I am glad that you found merit in my posting. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 7/24/2023 11:16:00 AM
Nice poem and a great win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/24/2023 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Jay, for your thoughtful drop by + note. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/24/2023 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Have a great day with your win......................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/24/2023 11:18:00 AM
Greetings Paula, You are so right - good, uplifting memories are the best to hold. Thank you for the supportive message. Cheers, Brian
Date: 7/23/2023 9:12:00 PM
Indeed, a great work. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/24/2023 6:10:00 AM
Many thanks Christuraj, for your congratulatory note. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/22/2023 10:17:00 PM
Hi Brian. Before I read your reply to Anaya's comments I recognized the 'Rosebud' reference..the name on the sledge in CK (I took this in the film to be him remembering on his deathbed a time in his life which marked his end of innocence) Your poem has many layers - like the film itself. Oh, and I heard Julie Andrews singing in there too. :) Wonderful stuff Brian. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/22/2023 10:31:00 PM
Hi Gary, You are one sharp, savvy reader (+poet). I never know whether to explain slightly concealed references in my postings or not. Youth may not be familiar with the Orson Welles' film. "These are a Few of My Favorite Things" certainly resonates loosely. I feel the posting requires more polish. Thank you again, Gary, for your unwavering support. Be well. Sincerely. Brian
Date: 7/22/2023 5:03:00 PM
Enjoyed all of your random whims, blips on recalling memories, some profound and others whimsy!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/22/2023 10:42:00 PM
Charles Kane was certainly a business magnate. Your reference to "Suits" is well suited. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 7/22/2023 7:48:00 PM
Ah the magnate, above my pay grade! I just finished "Suits" does that count?
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/22/2023 5:44:00 PM
Hi Anaya, Many thanks for your stop by and supportive message. The "rosebud dreams" allude to "Citizen Kane" - one of my favorite films. I hope your summer goes well. Brian

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