Memories That Just Won'T Go

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Shivering me, lost in thoughts of falling snow 
with eyes impaled on lights that blink and glow 
I watch the Christmas scene unfold and flow 
into a stitch of time, that hours can't un-sew 

The little girl in me that once took life in toe 
has disappeared from view and now I must forgo
the ringing of the bells this year, for I am still 
standing at the window waiting for you,  Bill 

Bereavement sucks and life can be a cruel blow 
I am still trying to figure out this slippery hill 
In my hands I hold three stones that I can't throw 
and an armload of love that death can never kill

Perhaps through this I can traverse and grow 
into a brilliant star of heaven and instill
the light that I once held that shone at will 
inside these memories, that just won't go...

November 11, 2021 
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger 
Contest Name: December Quatrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 12/1/2021 8:51:00 PM
Memories never die especially of dear ones.Through pain and heartache, you can kindle light and be the star of Heaven ! Beautifully penned and quite poignant, dear friend ! Stay Blessed !
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Date: 12/1/2021 2:58:00 AM
Bitter/sweet poem Vie. As we grow older memories are so precious...Delice
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Date: 11/30/2021 11:06:00 PM
Very beautiful, this poem resonates with me!
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Date: 11/30/2021 11:02:00 PM
We try to write about the good things in life, but in reality life can be cruel. Great emotional poem. Hugs.
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Date: 11/30/2021 4:44:00 PM
Memories can be sweet as candy or cut through the heart like a dull knife inflicting pain...a strong poem filled with emotion
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Date: 11/30/2021 2:29:00 PM
A sad yet so lovely a poem, from you, Vie.
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Date: 11/30/2021 1:38:00 PM
Love the line, "scene unfold and flow into a stitch of time, that hours can't un-sew , " Sweet lady hope you're doing well. Lots of hugs and love from me to you and you loved ones.
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Date: 11/30/2021 9:53:00 AM
Your poem is so poignant and full of love it touches my heart and brings back a sleigh full of memories, Vie. Good writing!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/30/2021 11:20:00 AM
Yes Christmas is a time of remembering those who loved and left us, they never truly leave our hearts do t hey Milton, thank you for your kind visit, Have a great day dear poet.
Date: 11/30/2021 8:24:00 AM
Poignant, piercing, painful … so delicately penned, Mystic!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/30/2021 9:02:00 AM
We are grieving someone special these days, thankyou for your kind visit dear U Seeker, :)
Date: 11/30/2021 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful and sad Rose…..a heart tugger! Debx
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/30/2021 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Deb, my daughter's future father in law passed away two week ago, and this was for his wife, who misses him . Thank you for dropping in, Blessings :)
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