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Memories On My Branches

Glorious spring sunshine kiss my limbs as they sprout With each opening bud, "I'm so alive" I want to shout April showers cling to me as I drink each delicious drop Hopefully chosen by blue jays to build their nest atop Caterpillars and ants tickle me as they crawl to and fro Nothing sweeter than watching everything around me grow Come sit under me, take a break from the hot summer sun Join me as I watch the baby birds leave their nest one by one Let's marvel at the beautiful butterflies that flutter all around The music of my friend the humming bird will surely astound Smell the delightful fragrance of all the many flowers in bloom Capture the magic nearby of a newly wedded bride and groom I'm bursting with colors of yellow, orange, red, gold and brown I proudly smile each time one of my leaves cascade down Laughing children make my day as they roll in my splendor You taking my picture makes this memory much more tender Scurrying squirrels truly fascinate me, as my acorns they hide Forgotten ones will one day be my saplings, I'll burst with pride Snow flakes have delightedly dressed me in a suit of white City folk string me with lights, I boastfully light up the night Skaters whipping by me, their energy and actions are compelling I feel so very blessed to have been rooted within this dwelling Come and join in the festivities and beauty of each and every season Become a memory on my branches, I can't think of a better reason *Dedicated to the 50-80 year old trees in Gage Park, Brampton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/25/2014 2:47:00 AM
Holy smokes, Batman. No shortage of descriptive imagery here. Nicely done, my friend. Peace :-)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/25/2014 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Mel. Hugs
Date: 4/13/2014 11:50:00 AM
hey and now I see it WON. BIG congrats to you, sweetie. Yours was really good and the dedication so sweet too.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/25/2014 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Andrea xo
Date: 4/7/2014 6:11:00 PM
NICE WIN CECILIA, ~SKAT~
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Skat xo
Date: 4/7/2014 8:05:00 AM
Lovely write Cecilia ! Congrats on win !!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma xo
Date: 4/6/2014 7:37:00 PM
If you stay in one place long enough you will notice [I bet you have] the MOTHER tree ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Debbie xo
Date: 3/21/2014 3:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem, Cecilia! Your descriptions of each season are truly wonderful, and each memory was captured so well. Personifying this tree was a unique way to go for this contest. It should be a winner! Good luck! ...Thank you so much for the kind comments. Hugs :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Kelly xo
Date: 3/20/2014 9:21:00 PM
still waiting on this one to be judged. Sure hope yours is on the winners list. I need to check if the contest closed out yet.
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Date: 3/13/2014 7:47:00 PM
It's been a while. Love this personification. Considering that acorns were mentioned in this poem this must be a tall and sturdy oak tree.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:51:00 PM
Yes JT, it's been way too long, this was first poem I wrote in 3 mths, glad to be back. Happy you enjoyed my poem. Hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 2:46:00 PM
I loved seeing the world through the eyes of trees
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:38:00 PM
I enjoyed giving them a voice, Hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 2:12:00 PM
such calming and vivid imagery, well done!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:55:00 PM
Thank you James. Hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 12:51:00 PM
Hey Sis, I just love this and would like to see the trees, very good image....David
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:44:00 PM
Hey Bro, you and your family come for a visit and I'll show you all the trees. Hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 8:50:00 AM
Hi Cecilia, nice to meet you. A beautiful oration of the seasons. It provokes the feeling of each season. Sounds like a winner!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:46:00 PM
Likewise Ralph, happy to have made you feel the seasons. Hugs
Date: 3/4/2014 2:52:00 PM
Cecelia....this is truly a captivating write!!!! I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as YOUR tree. You did trees proud. Hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Eileen for such a uplifting and sweet comment, I was proud to give this one a voice. Hugs
Date: 3/3/2014 6:39:00 PM
you did MARVELOUSLY with the theme,what a great way to come back with a fresh new post for us!! Love how you made it be the memories of the tree branch itself Sure to be a winner.
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Date: 3/3/2014 2:28:00 PM
Sounds magnificent, makes me think of the old growth forests along the coast of British Columbia.
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Date: 3/3/2014 9:16:00 AM
A well crafted piece...great work...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 6:10:00 PM
Hi Joseph, sorry for the late thanks, happy you enjoyed reading my poem
Date: 3/3/2014 5:38:00 AM
- Same place with different images - sounds like a beautifuly place to be whatever the season....a beautiful poem, Cecilia. - A winning poem :) - good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:59:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, late with my thanks but I appreciate your kind warm comments xo
Date: 3/2/2014 2:57:00 PM
Cecilia, beauty is transference... Beautifully written... Verlena
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 7:18:00 PM
Hi Verlena, late with my thanks, thank you for your kind and lovely comments. Hugs
Date: 3/2/2014 4:28:00 AM
You have put me right there with you under that mighty tree with your clear and vivid observations Cecilia...I have followed your poetry for a long time now and am taking great pleasure in watching you grow into a very fine poet indeed....Reads like a winner to me - Tim
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Tim, your so sweet and kind xo
Date: 3/1/2014 9:23:00 PM
Wonderful personification! Delightful and imaginative! I enjoyed this very much, Cecilia! Love, Kim
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/9/2014 5:57:00 PM
Hi Kim, late with my thanks, but I appreciate your kind warm comments xo
Date: 3/1/2014 1:56:00 PM
To a tree, fifty to eighty years makes them practically a toddler. Good descriptive write. If trees could think and talk, this is what they most likely would say.
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