Memories On Branches

An old board and a rope had made me a swing,
Sitting there when I was around the age of nine,
I curiously looked up to see the first sign of spring,
Where a robin was building a nest of twigs entwined.

Summer's heat burned my shoulders, so I sought shade,
I climbed up into your strong arms at the age of fourteen,
Along with a book, I relaxed in a solitude no one could invade,
I found myself lost within the pages and the leaves of green.

On a lazy, autumn afternoon, at the age of twenty-three,
I raked the dead leaves that buried my feet into a pile,
Through the orange limbs my black cat peered down at me,
Then leapt from the tree to play among the leaves for awhile.

Now, as I am rapidly approaching the age of thirty-one,
Branches are encased in ice, as winter continues to unfold,
From my window, I see the cardinals and the disappearing sun,
Reminding me that life still survives in the bitter cold.





March, 7th, 2014

Gail Angel Doyle's contest - "Memories On Branches"
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Zerbst Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 9:42 AM
This is one awesome poem! I read it really slow so I could try to take in all the imagery of the different seasons, but I did not take it all in the first time to be sure. The second stanza has some really good personification in it too. You inspire!
Deschler Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thank you so much, Isaiah. I always appreciate your kind and encouraging comments. I am very happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
A  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Kelly, , Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you:). ~SKAT~
Deschler Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT. :)
Harper Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Excellent poem, Gail, you let me share your various experiences beneath the tree branches, congratulations on your win.
Deschler Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Thank you very much, Sheri. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Harper Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Oops, so sorry Kelly, I really though I was reading Gail's still. Congratulations on your win, Kelly
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April 7, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Kelly this one is a wonderful write ! Congrats on ur win ,,
Deschler Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much. I am happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Mohn Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Great poem Kelly...congrats :)
Deschler Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Thank you very much, David! :)
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April 3, 2014 at 1:34 PM
nicely done Kelly... A lovely win...Linda
Deschler Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, once again, Linda. I always appreciate your kind words! :)
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April 3, 2014 at 8:46 AM
You paint a beautiful picture of memories on branches reflecting the seasons of life. Congrat's on your win, kelly and thank you for honoring me with a first place win in your recent contest. Elaine
Deschler Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Elaine. And, you are very welcome for the placement. Thank you for entering my contest. :)
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem showing the loyalty of your friend, the tree. Nicely done. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Joyce. Trees do make wonderful friends, because they are always there when we need them most! :)
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:21 AM
Hi Kelly, Congrats on your win. A nurturing tree, I could well believe it, as trees have a spirituality and sustaining nature of their own. Regards Theresa xx
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Hi Theresa, I agree with you, trees do seem to be very protective, and they can be that friend who is always there, no matter what. Thank you for the kind comments! :)
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:50 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,kelly
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. It was interesting to see the variety of forms used in this contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:49 AM
wow how did I never see this one.It is so gorgeous, Kelly. And I see it won. Congratulations.
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Sometimes, I post too many poems at once, then they do tend to get overlooked. I'm glad you are seeing this one now, though. Thank you for your kind words, Andrea! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. :)
A  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Hi Kelly, AWESOME ENDING:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Hi SKAT, Thank you so much! :)
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 10:46 PM
You've spun a fine tale. Congratulations on your glory. Cheers!
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Thank you very much, Michael!
Phookan Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 1:20 PM
This poem spoke to me, it was one I could easily relate to. Beautifully written! Congrats on your fabulous win and write Kelly and thank you so much for supporting my contest! love to you...
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so much for your nice comments, Gautami! I'm very happy you enjoyed my poem and that you found it relatable. I do appreciate my placement in your contest! :)
Macfarlane Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 7:06 PM
I love this Kelly, enjoyed watching you grow and change with each season...well written lovely write. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Thank you so much, Cecilia! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Your kind comments really meant a lot to me! Hugs :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:41 PM
Great work about life's phases..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am honored to be on the winners' list in your contest..Sara
Deschler Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Thank you for your kind visit, as well, Sara! Your poem was deserving of a first place win. Thanks for entering! :)
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March 12, 2014 at 11:30 AM
This is great. Again, very simple, but very soulful and deep. There is definite beauty in simplicity. This is sure to be a winning entry. Enjoyed it very much, SP :)
Deschler Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 4:51 PM
Thank you once again, BP! I completely agree with you, there is much beauty in simplicity. I guess that I've just been in a lighter mood lately. But, don't worry, I will be getting back to writing those deep, metaphorical and complex poems shortly! I do appreciate your wonderful comments, my friend! :)
Davis Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Kelly Such a wonderfully written poem of this branch that has brought you so many memories through the years. Thanks for the great comment on my Good Peeps poem. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Thank you very much, Robin! I always appreciate your kind visits, my friend. :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 2:09 PM
astounding write knitting all seasons like an ensemble,kelly.. can't still pull one as lovely as this.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Your comment really meant a lot to me! Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:25 PM
- Beautiful poem, Kelly. ( I love the spring ) - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I do appreciate the good luck wishes! I love the spring, too. It is finally feeling like springtime here, and less like winter! :)
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