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Memories of You..

When we first met I thought as you as a boy that were just like the others... But as I got to know you..You were the one that just another...I gave you all the love that I had and even me... Just to think about this right now is hard to breathe.. memories of you always bring tears to my eyes when I remember those days when you told me lies... I always pictured us being together forever until the end..I remember when I looked in your eyes and I asked you "do you love me?"...and you said "yes" but now I see the word "yes" turned into the word distress... I knew that you loved me and I loved you but the point is why did you have to do what you do..? Memories of you I wish that I could bring all that back and make this love thing turn into a fact..?

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Date: 7/20/2009 12:31:00 PM
aww thank u so much for giving me the advice and I toke your advice when you said write something happy and that's what I'am working on today....!!!...
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:18:00 AM
Well, Kade ... true love is wanting the best for another person, regardless of what it costs you. This is very rare, and unfortunately rarer in men than in women. We watch what our mothers do, and that's what we understand, but boys watch their fathers, and they see that "I love you" can get them a long way. It's very distressing when you find that you have been used - yet again. But don't give up. Your true soulmate is out there, and when you meet him, you will know it's the real thing.
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Date: 7/19/2009 12:48:00 PM
thank u very much....
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Date: 7/19/2009 11:39:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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