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Memories of the Viking

I stood upon the hill and closed my eyes, And listened to the sound of wind and rain; My face and hair were wet, my body chilled, And then I sensed the presence of the Dane. I turned around and saw him watching me, And rooted to the spot, I forced a smile - Although, the hairs were rising on my neck - As motionless, he watched me all the while. He wore a helmet, held an axe and shield, A giant man, with flaxen beard and hair, The face was hard, his eyes were cold and blue - I can’t describe the menace in his stare. It seemed like hours; I stared into that face, And all the while, consumed by fearful dread; I knew he meant me harm but couldn’t move - Oh yes, I would have turned around and fled. The booming thunder seemed to break the spell; He glowed - then disappeared, as lightning flashed; Though sceptics laugh and say I’d drank too much, I’d found the place the Viking’s gold was stashed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/23/2011 7:07:00 PM
I always loved seeing movies about the vikings when i was a kid. Kirk Douglas made one of them. this was a well written piece of poetry Jack, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Our dog Dusty, yes i was, not knowing if he was in good hands and if he found a good home drove me crazy for years.
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:01:00 AM
I got sand in my hair while I read this
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:46:00 PM
Magnificent piece Jack.. true recounting of the days when Viking ruled the world.. did u ever see the movie The Vikings with Kirk Douglas and Tony Curtis? an awesome adventure into their brutality and lifestyle... but oh their power luv.. good luck if for any contest.. enjoyed this adventure with u my friend..
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:31:00 PM
i love it Jack.. very thought and heart pounding.. like a story... he he he! i enjoyed the ending..lol.. now give me half the gold... j.k. take care,..Linda
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:09:00 AM
Im always in awe of the ideas people get for poems..what made you think this one up? Its outstanding..your description of the Viking made me take a deep breath! BG
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:42:00 AM
Wow! What a great story behind this poem. From the "booming thunder" I'm assuming this was the Nordic God Thor. In photos he does seem fearful, Jack. Awesome poem -- staring at the God an unable to move. At least you found his gold though! Donations are welcome, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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