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Ah the lovely seasdie
Ah the lovely seaside

Childhood scents
Salt air, Salty bitter memories

Jacques had turned just seven
He dreamed to walk along the seashore
He dreamed to see the seagulls sore overhead
He most of all dreamed to leave his basement

All the windows were covered with curtains
The days, nights no matter
His life was the darkness
His momma and papa, gave away their smiles

There were many days, the lightening was eternal
Well into the night
His mother held him tight
They both absorbed the fear of the other

Many mornings, Momma, can I walk to the beach?
No Jacques my little one, you must stay here
Help is needed in the kitchen
He wondered what help. We have no food to cook?

Many a day when no one was watching him
He would peek out the window, longing
The beach was simply down the street and to the left
Oh how he dreamed to run and play and splash in the waves

Summer was warming up his heart
He knew his momma and papa loved him
He knew these were bad times
Even so, he decided, tomorrow, yes tomorrow

So on the night of June the 5th
He planned well, hiding his boots out back
Made a small backpack for snacks and his jacket
He fell into a deep sleep, so very pleased

Up early he snuck out of the house
Past the bakers and in between soldiers patrolling
Quite easily he found the path down to the beach
Little did poor Jacques know he was to become a part of history

He ran from a little inlet out onto the beach
Jumping and dancing and gleefully singing to the seagulls
As he observed boats of all shapes and sizes and sailing to shore
His spine tingled, with a foreboding

The seaside
Became hell
Darkness clouded Jacques world
Bombs and gunfire rained down from all sides

Jacques tried to run, but his feet became heavy
He stumbles and fell to the sand
Thousands of solders emerged from the sea
Racing towards him, some running, some falling

A young Canadian man, Victor was his name
Firing his rifle, and racing for the shore saw the young boy
He had a new born baby back home, named him jack
Well he ran and fell atop the young boy, yelling above the fray

Stay quiet young man, don’t move
I will protect you, fear not
Even fear was the meal of the day
As the seaside became Dante’s eternal hell

The Germans above, fired all they had towards the beach
Machine gunners fired, mortars rained and snipers took aim
A young German man with a rifle was shooting anyone
Whom by miracle was still moving

His sites were set on that particular Canadian soldier
He took aim then saw a boy underneath the soldier
Well at the end of the battle, that young German soldier
Had one bullet left in his rifle

He could not fire
In the heat of battle
He pulled out a photo of his young boy Erik
He kissed the photo, and wept

It was the Germans last thought
As a bullet ripped of his head
The Canadian soldier was staring at this exact moment
Pain ripped his heart, as if he too was dead

Miraculously Jacques survived that day
When he made his way back home
His momma and papa hugged him so tight
They almost strangled him

For the rest his life
Jacques never went by the seaside, not once
For him he tasted the bitter smell of cordite death 
He lived his life in the vineyards, far from the sea

One may wonder now
How do I know all of this?
Well I work at an old folk’s home as an orderly
I take care of poor old Jacques

I remind him daily
No Jacques we will not be going to the seaside
Somehow, I feel obligated to this old man
As did my grandfather those many years ago

Who saved the life of a little boy named Jacques
June 6, 1944

Sidenote

Erik and Jacques both developed a passion for wines and vineyards and became the best of friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/10/2015 7:46:00 AM
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/12/2015 11:50:00 PM
I think I did! I have been away, if I missed it email me!!!! Cheers
Date: 6/9/2015 8:47:00 PM
Merci pour elles! À couper le souffle...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/1/2015 4:43:00 PM
Merci bien!
Date: 5/22/2015 9:53:00 PM
I finally read your comment down here to me. I was wondering if you had made up this one. Kind of like historical fiction which is so fascinating on TV shows and movies. Again, I love this.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/9/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, is nice that so many people read, not for me, but for the persons I wrote this for!
Date: 5/22/2015 10:11:00 AM
7 all the way, I was riveted from start to finish. Exceptional piece of writing. I posted a new one this morning as well.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/9/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thanks Richard! Much appreciated!
Date: 5/21/2015 9:46:00 PM
You are an excellent story teller! Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2015 8:28:00 PM
This poem is great, and long enough to be a short story, keep it up, i loved this !
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Billy
Date: 5/17/2015 7:45:00 PM
This is definitely a big winner - magnificent piece! You just have a special gift, Arthur and I am a fan! I rate this a solid "7!" Pandita
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2015 7:17:00 PM
You are a very kind hearted woman Pandita, thank you!
Date: 5/17/2015 2:11:00 PM
what a stirring write, Arthur...I am awed by this; a winner for me... huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/17/2015 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Nette, very kind of you! hugs
Date: 5/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
This is quite a story you have given us of that tragic day in history. So many lives lost. you are a great story teller, Arthur. The way you have told this, I assume it is true, unless you are taking poetic license with the sidenote. Let me know if it is a true story of your family. Stories like these in the lives of my friends always astound me!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, I was supposed to go to Paris recently, and was hoping to listen to all the stories of my friends grandmother, and she just recently passed away, so instead, I just made a story up for the telling. Many of my historical writes are based on true stories, this one however came from my imagination!
Date: 5/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
and a big SEVEN
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 10:29:00 PM
This is very sweet of you, as often I know my story is good but I have doubts as to the poem itself! Thank you! Hugs
Date: 5/16/2015 3:57:00 PM
Great story Arthur...just goes to show what a man will do for a child especially when thinking of his own
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 5/16/2015 11:37:00 AM
Hi Arthur. Ah, what a great tale you have told of the devastation of war and the affect it can have on a young lad. The sacrifice that the soldier had made was so well described and the whole scene was vivid in my mind. Fine work, my friend..... Robert.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Robert!
Date: 5/16/2015 12:57:00 AM
Loved this great story. So glad Jacques survived. But sad, painful memories of the sea...#7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thanks Nandita!

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