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Ah the lovely seasdie Ah the lovely seaside Childhood scents Salt air, Salty bitter memories Jacques had turned just seven He dreamed to walk along the seashore He dreamed to see the seagulls sore overhead He most of all dreamed to leave his basement All the windows were covered with curtains The days, nights no matter His life was the darkness His momma and papa, gave away their smiles There were many days, the lightening was eternal Well into the night His mother held him tight They both absorbed the fear of the other Many mornings, Momma, can I walk to the beach? No Jacques my little one, you must stay here Help is needed in the kitchen He wondered what help. We have no food to cook? Many a day when no one was watching him He would peek out the window, longing The beach was simply down the street and to the left Oh how he dreamed to run and play and splash in the waves Summer was warming up his heart He knew his momma and papa loved him He knew these were bad times Even so, he decided, tomorrow, yes tomorrow So on the night of June the 5th He planned well, hiding his boots out back Made a small backpack for snacks and his jacket He fell into a deep sleep, so very pleased Up early he snuck out of the house Past the bakers and in between soldiers patrolling Quite easily he found the path down to the beach Little did poor Jacques know he was to become a part of history He ran from a little inlet out onto the beach Jumping and dancing and gleefully singing to the seagulls As he observed boats of all shapes and sizes and sailing to shore His spine tingled, with a foreboding The seaside Became hell Darkness clouded Jacques world Bombs and gunfire rained down from all sides Jacques tried to run, but his feet became heavy He stumbles and fell to the sand Thousands of solders emerged from the sea Racing towards him, some running, some falling A young Canadian man, Victor was his name Firing his rifle, and racing for the shore saw the young boy He had a new born baby back home, named him jack Well he ran and fell atop the young boy, yelling above the fray Stay quiet young man, don’t move I will protect you, fear not Even fear was the meal of the day As the seaside became Dante’s eternal hell The Germans above, fired all they had towards the beach Machine gunners fired, mortars rained and snipers took aim A young German man with a rifle was shooting anyone Whom by miracle was still moving His sites were set on that particular Canadian soldier He took aim then saw a boy underneath the soldier Well at the end of the battle, that young German soldier Had one bullet left in his rifle He could not fire In the heat of battle He pulled out a photo of his young boy Erik He kissed the photo, and wept It was the Germans last thought As a bullet ripped of his head The Canadian soldier was staring at this exact moment Pain ripped his heart, as if he too was dead Miraculously Jacques survived that day When he made his way back home His momma and papa hugged him so tight They almost strangled him For the rest his life Jacques never went by the seaside, not once For him he tasted the bitter smell of cordite death He lived his life in the vineyards, far from the sea One may wonder now How do I know all of this? Well I work at an old folk’s home as an orderly I take care of poor old Jacques I remind him daily No Jacques we will not be going to the seaside Somehow, I feel obligated to this old man As did my grandfather those many years ago Who saved the life of a little boy named Jacques June 6, 1944 Sidenote Erik and Jacques both developed a passion for wines and vineyards and became the best of friends

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Date: 6/10/2015 7:46:00 AM
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/12/2015 11:50:00 PM
I think I did! I have been away, if I missed it email me!!!! Cheers
Date: 6/9/2015 8:47:00 PM
Merci pour elles! À couper le souffle...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/1/2015 4:43:00 PM
Merci bien!
Date: 5/22/2015 9:53:00 PM
I finally read your comment down here to me. I was wondering if you had made up this one. Kind of like historical fiction which is so fascinating on TV shows and movies. Again, I love this.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/9/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, is nice that so many people read, not for me, but for the persons I wrote this for!
Date: 5/22/2015 10:11:00 AM
7 all the way, I was riveted from start to finish. Exceptional piece of writing. I posted a new one this morning as well.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/9/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thanks Richard! Much appreciated!
Date: 5/21/2015 9:46:00 PM
You are an excellent story teller! Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2015 8:28:00 PM
This poem is great, and long enough to be a short story, keep it up, i loved this !
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Billy
Date: 5/17/2015 7:45:00 PM
This is definitely a big winner - magnificent piece! You just have a special gift, Arthur and I am a fan! I rate this a solid "7!" Pandita
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2015 7:17:00 PM
You are a very kind hearted woman Pandita, thank you!
Date: 5/17/2015 2:11:00 PM
what a stirring write, Arthur...I am awed by this; a winner for me... huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/17/2015 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Nette, very kind of you! hugs
Date: 5/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
This is quite a story you have given us of that tragic day in history. So many lives lost. you are a great story teller, Arthur. The way you have told this, I assume it is true, unless you are taking poetic license with the sidenote. Let me know if it is a true story of your family. Stories like these in the lives of my friends always astound me!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, I was supposed to go to Paris recently, and was hoping to listen to all the stories of my friends grandmother, and she just recently passed away, so instead, I just made a story up for the telling. Many of my historical writes are based on true stories, this one however came from my imagination!
Date: 5/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
and a big SEVEN
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 10:29:00 PM
This is very sweet of you, as often I know my story is good but I have doubts as to the poem itself! Thank you! Hugs
Date: 5/16/2015 3:57:00 PM
Great story Arthur...just goes to show what a man will do for a child especially when thinking of his own
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 5/16/2015 11:37:00 AM
Hi Arthur. Ah, what a great tale you have told of the devastation of war and the affect it can have on a young lad. The sacrifice that the soldier had made was so well described and the whole scene was vivid in my mind. Fine work, my friend..... Robert.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Robert!
Date: 5/16/2015 12:57:00 AM
Loved this great story. So glad Jacques survived. But sad, painful memories of the sea...#7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/16/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thanks Nandita!

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