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Memories of Love-Ten Words

Memories of Love – Ten Words Love like a twirling tempest, whirled us to an uncharted shore of unbridled, sublime, sensuality, gifting me with moonlit memories that would never be forgotten. How I savored those kisses from your lips… milk chocolate lips flavored with the lingering tangy taste of fresh, luscious, wild, ripened, crimson raspberries… dipped in cool whipped cream. Creating sterling silver ripples on the ocean, we waltzed by the glow of a yellow, ballooned, harvest moon. Like a singular, silent shadow, we fused as one igniting entity…silhouettes painted-in by the black of night. Youth and dreams may fade away like scenery from an old water-color painting; but I’ll always recall, like it was yesterday, the ecstasy of love shared, when we floated away on a carpet of tinsel-lined clouds, cloaked in the grace of blue-gray, early misty morning. 04-13-2018 Contest: 10 Words Sponsor: Joseph May Placement: 2nd 10 words used: love, tempest, shore, forgotten, crimson, harvest, shadow, yesterday, grace, misty

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Date: 8/1/2018 8:46:00 PM
You are like the God-dess of Love my sweets. Everything is love and I do love that in you. Like I said without the mingling of Love their is nothing.--- Love you my sweets
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Date: 8/2/2018 8:36:00 AM
Awwww - how very sweet of you, Al! I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments and support - such a great encouragement. Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 4/24/2018 7:21:00 AM
A rich and sensual piece, Pandita, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 4/24/2018 4:48:00 PM
Hi Viv, thank you for visiting and leaving your high praises which mean a lot to me! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 4/23/2018 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful romantic scene.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/24/2018 4:47:00 PM
Hi Susan, I appreciate your kind congratulatory words! Thank you so much. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/23/2018 5:47:00 PM
I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/24/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you again dear Alexis for swinging back with your congratulatory words! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/23/2018 1:29:00 PM
Beautifully penned Pandita..Congrats on your win
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/24/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you so very much Joseph for including this piece on your winners' list! I am delighted! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/16/2018 12:45:00 AM
A gorgeous write, Pandita, and a winner for sure! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hi Greg, I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments and support - such a great encouragement. Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 4/13/2018 1:44:00 PM
- Beautiful to read, Pandita ... the words flow with your memories :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/14/2018 9:48:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I hope you are doing well, my friend! Your comments and compliments always mean a lot to me. Thank you very much! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 4/13/2018 10:33:00 AM
WOW! Pandita, You've penned such a sensual and romantic write with chosen words. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest Well done:-) Alexis
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/13/2018 10:42:00 AM
Dear Alexis, thank you so much for your lovely complimentary words. Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 4/13/2018 10:13:00 AM
oh such sensual imagery Pandita, such beautiful memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:40:00 AM
Awwww! Thank you so very much, Jan! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 4/13/2018 9:41:00 AM
Fabulous memories..well crafted to win!
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you kindly Vijay for your lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita
Date: 4/13/2018 9:39:00 AM
Delightful, Pandita. I particularly love the "sterling silver ripples on the ocean". Beautiful done.
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind complimentary words! I am happy you enjoyed reading this piece! Hugs. Pandita

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