Memories of Him

A morning splash of after shave 

cigarette burnt fingers 

that told me what to do 


Life was walloped in our kitchen  

by mother dusted hands  


He grabs my hand and asks me 

in a quiet whisper I could hear,   

"Where is your mom ?" 

"She's in the attic painting, Dad "


I remember the pointed finger 

and the scruffy voice that said, 

"Mark my words son, 

one day you'll be all grown up

and you may not remember me ?"


His bushy brows and sardonic smile

the way  he loved too much to rile, 

"Do you know who I am, dad ? "


silence....


A morning splash of light on vacant eyes 

so much like mine and then, 

he sighs....


Mystic Rose 

5/2/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:08 PM
This is so touching and sad and hopeful, all at once!
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 4:03 PM
soulful rendering of a moment poignant and heartfelt... you are really an old soul, vie.. huggs
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Such powerful memories, Pixie...and the ending lines are superb! That morning splash of light on vacant eyes says it all. ~ Best regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 2:07 PM
How sad it is as we all grow older each day that passes and one day it will be our turn - light on vacant eyes .......and then he sighs. Well penned Pixie dust artfully described in poetic brilliance. Hugs, Jennifer.
Warrior Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Well crafted my friend...a capturing read Pix...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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