Memories of Him

A morning splash of after shave 

cigarette burnt fingers 

that told me what to do 


Life was walloped in our kitchen  

by mother dusted hands  


He grabs my hand and asks me 

in a quiet whisper I could hear,   

"Where is your mom ?" 

"She's in the attic painting, Dad "


I remember the pointed finger 

and the scruffy voice that said, 

"Mark my words son, 

one day you'll be all grown up

and you may not remember me ?"


His bushy brows and sardonic smile

the way  he loved too much to rile, 

"Do you know who I am, dad ? "


silence....


A morning splash of light on vacant eyes 

so much like mine and then, 

he sighs....


Mystic Rose 

5/2/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/8/2019 4:08:00 PM
This is so touching and sad and hopeful, all at once!
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Date: 5/3/2019 4:03:00 PM
soulful rendering of a moment poignant and heartfelt... you are really an old soul, vie.. huggs
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Date: 5/3/2019 2:29:00 PM
Such powerful memories, Pixie...and the ending lines are superb! That morning splash of light on vacant eyes says it all. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 5/3/2019 2:07:00 PM
How sad it is as we all grow older each day that passes and one day it will be our turn - light on vacant eyes .......and then he sighs. Well penned Pixie dust artfully described in poetic brilliance. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/2/2019 9:37:00 AM
Well crafted my friend...a capturing read Pix...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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