Memories of Bach

Memories of Bach

At 17, I performed a solo ballet to Bach
Below a sparkling sky,
On a park’s open green grass.
The choreography flowed.  
I was well-rehearsed.
The opportunity, special, before 
Some of our gathered city’s spectators.
This genius: Bach.
This glorious cantata:
 “Jesu,]oy of Man’s Desiring.”
And, I, the young ballerina, 
Wrapped very Grecian-like in an ivory, silk tunic, 
Stepping out to 
Meet the first notes,
Humbly opening my arms 
— first right, then left —
To invite the music to my dance.
But, barely a quarter-minute into the piece,
I was overwhelmed —
As my first dance ever
Out-of-doors —
The sky was my ceiling
And it was too high,
Making my reaching upward breathless.
There were no stage wings 
To mark the arrowing points of my arabesques.
My memory lost all upcoming moves
To the  sparse clouds 
in their swirling crossing of the sky.
I let Bach choreograph my choice
Of upcoming motions as I
Let myself become his music
On to the end.

About a decade later, 
On a cloudless, August day, 
(the hottest day that year).
I asked for Bach
To sound, again.  
Dear Bach’s
“Jesu Joy of Man’s Desiring,” rose
Meeting our ears so magnificently
From the organ, as
I stepped into the church, 
Wearing yards of wrapped white silk.
I stepped gently down the aisle 
Toward my waiting groom.
My own joy carried me
Into the cantata
In celebration of 
Our wedding day and
Of our decades of love
Together, on that day
Just beginning.

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(c) sally young Eslinger 10/21 poem
Thanks be to God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/26/2021 10:31:00 AM
Such happy piece to look at Sally May your joy be always full And the days and nights kind To the love you live' As for myself it's Bach to My own page for now.'
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Date: 10/9/2021 9:02:00 AM
Beautifully-written with the fine nod to Bach's "Jesu..." which meant so much in both experiences. Your gift of dance leant itself so well to floating down the aisle when you were married. Love this poem.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/11/2021 10:22:00 PM
Hi, I replied to you in my head yesterday, but guess I didn’t type it. Such sweet words! You got the circles going on in this poem. I like baroque music & hearing Jesu again leapt the memories to a poem. Thanks for commenting Hugs!
Date: 10/9/2021 8:23:00 AM
As graceful as your dance I'm sure, you bring those moments of music together so seamlessly, I also like how you describe the sky as the ceiling 'too high' - it makes me feel like I was there.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/11/2021 10:29:00 PM
Michelle! Thanks 4 stopping by to read & comment. I feel like I’m talking about a cafe when I type that :) anyway, that second of raising my open hand to the ceiling was the EXACT sec I lost the rest of the ballet. Will never forget it! Your comment means a lot. So respect your work. Hugs
Date: 10/9/2021 8:09:00 AM
What a lovely poem with a happy ending.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/11/2021 10:36:00 PM
Victor! Hope your day is beginning well! Thank you for your supportive comment. Of all, your comments have helped me strive higher & research more & expand my subjects more. I am so thankful 4 that. Wrote a blog dealing w/that I posted today. Hope you’ll check it out. Big hugs
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