Memories Adorn My Heart

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 A collage of memories adorn the walls of my heart. Some appear and bring a smile, the worthwhile ones that shine like faceted diamonds in the midnight sky. Indelible are my visions of births, marriage and days when life offered more rewards than I felt I deserved. But there are also deaths; those jagged shards, that cut me like sharpened spears of broken glass. They're bitter weapons that cause me pain with each remembered slash that opened a new wound. Oh, such strife, anguish, and tidal waves of regrets that leave me shipwrecked and alone. There are snippets and scraps of our wedding day, shrouded and shadowed now... Those pictures are finger worn, edges bent from turning them often, when I feel forlorn and miss your arms around me . Love comes without safeguards and guarantees so please, dear heart, don't bring those echoes of the past to mind. I've come to grips with my brokenness until moonlight reminds me of what used to be. In that moment I'm wistful and somber stumbling in the darkness... trying to climb from the gloom of a deep abyss. September 1, 2020 All The Little Pieces Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/10/2020 2:36:00 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/17/2020 1:15:00 AM
Thanks for the honor, Constance.
Date: 9/4/2020 4:27:00 AM
- Falling down is easy ... getting up is difficult :) - A lovely poem, Jenna :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/5/2020 3:55:00 AM
True, Anne-Lise, and not always easy to stay standing, but each day it gets a little easier. Thanks for your support ~ poetically and emotionally.
Date: 9/3/2020 10:15:00 PM
I can feel the clouds over this one, Jenna. Your images of hurt are powerful ones: jagged shards, knives, broken glass. The line "Love comes without safeguards and guarantees" is spoken with true wisdom and a touch of melancholy. I'm sorry for your sadness, but always blessed by your artistic expression. Congrats ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/5/2020 3:54:00 AM
A rainy day write to hide the tears. Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, John.
Date: 9/2/2020 9:25:00 PM
Terrifically written, my friend. Best wishes from my heart. Pangie xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/3/2020 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie. Your heart is a big one and I value your thoughts.
Date: 9/2/2020 4:23:00 AM
I can feel a deep pain in this verse as pieces of your broken heart lay upon the ground. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/3/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thanks so much for your insight, John. I really appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 9/1/2020 2:46:00 PM
Painful memories that don't seem to ease with the passage of time. Only a new found love will erase them and lift you out of that dark abyss. Well written Jenna and good luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 2:52:00 PM
Your thoughts are always kind and gentle. Thank you, Tom.
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