Memories

Ash white smoke curls softly From the cut-stone chimney Where a portrait of simplicity Sleeps eternally in my mind.
======================================== from the poem "Firewood" written October 29, 1978 Entry: "Liberum Divisa 5" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Richard Barden May 5, 2021 (3)
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Lane Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 6:53 AM
I see quite easily why these lines were honored in Greg's contest. Congratulations, Andy. I've recently returned to the Soup, and am enjoying reading you.
Chunn Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Well, right back at you. Still laughing about Santa. Glad you are here with us.
Hamilton Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Very nice imagery Andy, congrats on your win!
Faulkner Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:04 PM
This is so lovely, Andy - 'portrait of simplicity' is so evocative, many congratulations on your placement~
Daniel Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:52 PM
That's a beautiful way to describe memories, Andy, congratulations on your win:)
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May 25, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in the Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest, Andy - thank you so much for entering! This was a very tough contest to judge as there were SO many wonderful entries - I loved reading your submission. Blessings! - the bard
Chunn Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Thank you for the kinds words and for the effort of offering the contest. I am enjoying reading your work as well.
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