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Memorials

I roam through cactus and moonlight, never knowing how old marrow can be fleshed from pores sewn in blank lines of endings ~ and here I am among rows of a year’s diary; these hands sanded by memorials of famine and feast ; sometimes wrinkled by the laundry of evenings’ regret. At times, like a torn gypsy rose burned in coal, I remember the faces of my family smelling of tar and mint , knitting arms flamed though midnight’s love, then doused by autumn’s muddy rain ~ gone just like that. 12/28/2015 For the Contest Deep and Dark Sponsor; Broken Wings
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January 15, 2016 at 10:11 PM
NETTE, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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January 8, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
Inman Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:46 AM
A truly beautifully written poem, Nette.
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Very well written, Nette. Love the image you found, too. Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win!
Godwin Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 8:58 AM
oh my gosh - you blew me away ... CayCay
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 12:58 AM
Nette, the feel of the agony, intrigue, mystery creatively recognized in every line/... Happy New Year!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Deep feelings etched in these lines, Nette. I'm left with a feeling of...sadness for things that can not be changed....Lovely. Good luck in the contest, dear.
Em Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Stirring poetry! Flowing effortless with real. raw emotions.I still feel this way when I think of my long-gone mother.
Goff Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Wow Nette, stunned by beauty
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 2:06 PM
- Heartbreaking sad, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 27, 2015 at 1:46 PM
The depth to this excellent poem creates a nostalgic mood and distinct imagery of pain. I know the feeling!
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Gosh Nette the imagery is very dark and sad:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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