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I roam through cactus and moonlight, never knowing how old marrow can be fleshed from pores sewn in blank lines of endings ~ and here I am among rows of a year’s diary; these hands sanded by memorials of famine and feast ; sometimes wrinkled by the laundry of evenings’ regret. At times, like a torn gypsy rose burned in coal, I remember the faces of my family smelling of tar and mint , knitting arms flamed though midnight’s love, then doused by autumn’s muddy rain ~ gone just like that. 12/28/2015 For the Contest Deep and Dark Sponsor; Broken Wings

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Date: 1/15/2016 10:11:00 PM
NETTE, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:31:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:46:00 AM
A truly beautifully written poem, Nette.
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Date: 1/8/2016 3:50:00 AM
Very well written, Nette. Love the image you found, too. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:42:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/31/2015 8:58:00 AM
oh my gosh - you blew me away ... CayCay
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:58:00 AM
Nette, the feel of the agony, intrigue, mystery creatively recognized in every line/... Happy New Year!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/27/2015 4:51:00 PM
Deep feelings etched in these lines, Nette. I'm left with a feeling of...sadness for things that can not be changed....Lovely. Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 12/27/2015 4:13:00 PM
Stirring poetry! Flowing effortless with real. raw emotions.I still feel this way when I think of my long-gone mother.
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:38:00 PM
Wow Nette, stunned by beauty
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:06:00 PM
- Heartbreaking sad, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
The depth to this excellent poem creates a nostalgic mood and distinct imagery of pain. I know the feeling!
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Date: 12/27/2015 12:57:00 PM
Gosh Nette the imagery is very dark and sad:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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