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January 6, 2018

Memorial Park

You came to me today
As I wandered the memorial park 
Looking for my father's brick
Chilled, leaning into the vicious cold
I dream of you one night
The next day you make your intentions known 
I take it as a Cosmic sign that our fates will intertwine
And so they do, though not as I expect
This will be a harsh lesson
I never had a lipstick kiss like yours
I'll taste it for years - this is not hyperbole 
Fool on the Hill on the car radio
You wear your Audrey Hepburn veneer
I think you are drawn to me because you think I will see
Your sadness and anger and vulnerability
And love you wildly for all of it
You want me to tell you that you are my Muse 
I’m consumed by dual thrills of illicitness and guilt
I make you material 
You awaken a desire to possess you
I let you manipulate me like the others
You hate me for it 
Your father has a brick here too
I don't know if you do
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Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:59 PM
O Andrew, an amazing poem. Belated congrats on your well deserved win.
Ashley Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Returning with another round of congratulations Andrew for your amazing win with your deeply emotional poem. I enjoyed reading it again! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:39 PM
A most enjoyable read. Congrats on your win. Well done, Andrew.
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Wonderful write Andrew, I think the first time reading you but will not be the last, congrats on a fine placement in my contest!
Jung Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Thank you very much John!
Ashley Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Andrew, returning with congratulations on your wonderful win with your powerful poem of deep melancholy. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Jung Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Thank you very much. I enjoyed your entry and congrats to you as well!
Scars Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:11 AM
full of melancholic depth, great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Jung Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Thank you so much Laura!
Ashley Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Wow! A powerfully and emotionally penned poem, Andrew. Poignant melancholy expressed so beautifully. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Wow, potent emotive pen! My best to you xomo
Jung Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Many thanks!
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