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We remember not only the soldier but the family. We remember it is not a beautiful thing, not the dying, not the body, not the tears, the lost years. The young and older gave up much. Some wanted to go, others were drafted. Who could fill their place at the table. In America, many restaurants and other venues will set a table for that soldier...that poignant empty space. Forget all our selfishness and silliness. Remember the soldiers who gave their all. 

You can hear a pin drop as the car circles the neighborhood and stands still, before the loud doors open and rose petals fall, as the highly decorated grim reaper wills himself to deliver bad news. — by poet Memorial Day What pin brings us to the table? The car circled and stopped one’s heart. The young are no longer living. The flag was waving - red, white, blue. The car circled, and stopped one’s heart, Sometime after the dark caved in. The flag was waving - red, white, blue. Celebration comes to a halt. Sometime, after the dark caved in, Rigor Mortis makes time stand still. Celebration came to a halt - Moment the soldier breathed his last. Rigor Mortis makes time stand still; Strong mother’s scream and father’s faint. Moment the soldier breathed his last, Silence filled his usual seat. Strong mother’s scream and father’s faint. The young are no longer living. Silence filled his usual seat. What pin brings us to the table?

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Date: 5/19/2025 8:19:00 PM
Yes, Kim, you did not submit it. It is an excellent and powerful poem. Reminds me that there is a song that was written during the Civil War called The Vacant Chair. You should look at the lyrics. Like your use of the pantoum to reinforce certain aspects. Well written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2025 5:12:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver! This contest was not easy to write for because it means so much. God bless! Sorry I forgot to enter it but still it brought this poem out of me.
Date: 5/19/2025 6:53:00 AM
Hi Kim, a very heart-rending Memorial Day poem for our fallen brothers and sisters in arms. The poem is beautifully penned and delivers a noble respect to them. Blessings to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Gina! Blessings!
Date: 5/17/2025 3:43:00 PM
You have a way with words, and making me cry as well as I read the depth and silence. The pin at my house is purple for Joseph, whom I have tucked in the middle of my name as 'Jo' who was my dad's best friend, closest cousin. I have two flags to fly in his honor, one has 48 stars as the flag bore when he died as he parachuted over Normandy. Thank you to the precious ones who gave their lives, and to their families won't forget the horrendous price that they and their loved ones paid for freedom.
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Date: 5/17/2025 5:54:00 PM
BJ, I am honored to hear your story. It is sad and beautiful. Bless you and yours and the service your loved one(s) gave. <3
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Date: 5/17/2025 3:48:00 PM
The second of the flags is a remembrance flag. Our current flag will bravely and proudly show her colors too <3
Date: 5/17/2025 9:56:00 AM
- So many who have received this bad news ... it must feel like a perpetual nightmare ... a day to remember ... with pride and sadness - A heartbreakingly beautiful poem, Kim - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2025 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs
Date: 5/16/2025 8:50:00 PM
An emotionally charged Pantoum. Soldiers who guard our country from enemy hands sacrifice not only their comforts, but lay down even their lives. A touching tribute, dear Kim.
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Date: 5/17/2025 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! It took me a bit to come up with something. Hugs :) I learned, years ago, from a woman who had her boyfriend go into the Vietnam War. She would receive letters from. The last one, she knew something was wrong, when the words went down the pages.
Date: 5/16/2025 6:57:00 PM
A breathtaking poem, stolen moments found- in your words. Wow. Really, wow. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, Paige xx
Date: 5/16/2025 6:34:00 PM
Sad and powerful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, my friend <3
Date: 5/16/2025 3:57:00 PM
thanks a lot , i am not american but i am grateful for your moving tribute, the informations you give are awesome and make the difference, thank you so much
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 5/16/2025 1:58:00 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful "Memorial Day" write/quote you have here. Many times the families are forgotten. "Good Luck" Make Love Not War As We Have A Blessed Day/Holiday Writing Away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2025 4:18:00 PM
Thank you for the Wow! I appreciate you, Paula!

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