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Memorial At the Carousel

My brother works at a carousel In a tiny mountain town And riders come from near and far Because of its renown. It mostly brings out smiles And occasionally tears But when the music starts, all trace Of sadness disappears. Except at a memorial When someone local’s died. The ride begins in silence, Not a single soul astride. The mourners stand outside the gate And watch without a sound As the animals go up and down And ‘round and ‘round and ‘round.

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Date: 1/22/2020 9:59:00 AM
Not sure what this does for the deceased. This reminds me of a prominent bishop some years ago who, in full dress, blessed a small fleet of fishing boats – not sure why, probably for a better than usual catch which didn't happen – the fish apparently were not persuaded. / M
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Date: 1/16/2020 6:37:00 PM
Whereas many people report "going into the light" when they died, my experience was like being in a rut on an LP, eternally going round and round until the needle strikes an opportunity to exist for a brief moment. I hope I can saddle up on an animal next time around! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/16/2020 6:05:00 PM
what a unique way to commemorate someone who has passed away, guess they are on their final journey after the merry go round of life, well penned as ever Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2020 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene, for teaching me about a custom I wasn't familiar with-- in a poetic form too. Best wishes, Gershon
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