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Memo To An Old Friend

Coming back again
Hard to do ... harder to start anew
The turnstile spins for body scans
Not quite natural
Broken sentences and furtive words
And we exactly where 
The fiber of the past was torn
Perhaps
Truth amended
Nothing more mended
And worse of it
I have no memory of wrong
I flew easy into you like a sky
And you dripped away
And now shadow twisting words
We spar lips
You are clearly sprinkling seeds
Under the cover of weeds
I am not ready to be baited
Let's just enjoy
What we forget
I have already destained my memory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/25/2009 5:09:00 AM
your heart reveals much in this fine poem! L'nass! well done! jimbo
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Date: 12/22/2009 4:49:00 PM
wow, you made me think!! Good work!
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Date: 12/22/2009 7:56:00 AM
Excellent write, as usual L'nass. I love this. "...I have no memory of wrong..." Only a forgiving and loving heart can do this. Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/22/2009 7:45:00 AM
We often find such difficulty in restoring a friendship, forgiving, and moving forward. Yes...how we stumble over broken sentence, furtive words....how much easier to just enjoy, and put the anger aside. Such an insightful poem on human feelings, L'nass. Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/22/2009 7:36:00 AM
Excellent piece you have penned here L'nass. Thought provoking and deep. Still conveys a message of forgiveness by forgetting the past! Thanks so much for sharing! Have a wonderful day~Mary
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