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Melting Your Frozen Heart

Melting your frozen heart. Why do you refuse to feel my love? Why has your heart grown cold? It´s so cold it is frozen solid, beating ever so slowly, for no one. A warm smile, a calid embrace, a compassionate understanding heart beating for you right beside you only for you here forever trying to jump start your frozen heart with the electrical spark of my love. Have you been abandoned and hurt so much that you feel too unworthy to be loved? Why do you not feel my warmth as I try to ease your pain? Your gelid coldness will turn your frozen heart into perma frost... if you don´t allow yourself to feel my warmth there will be a cost. A price to pay that is far to high... for a heart that remains cool to anothers love will stay frozen and will slowly die. A frozen heart can melt but it takes time... to feel love again can be so surreal ever so sublime. Open to me my love... feel what I feel with tenderness kindness and patience true love is revealed Open your heart... let it feel my love´s fire even from a distance you can feel the warmth your heart can melt and beat with mine beating as one...together till the end of time. John Derek Hamilton March 1,2016

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Date: 9/3/2017 10:37:00 AM
I remember reading this one, JD. I was even the first to comment on it. You'll not win a debate with me over which of us wrote the preferred words with this theme. Let's just shake hands and say it's a tie. ;-)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2017 5:58:00 PM
Ok deal!!
Date: 4/6/2017 8:28:00 PM
This is truly beautiful, John. I can relate to these feelings and to her fear of opening the heart and letting love in... And I see from your comments below that she has had a change of heart :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2017 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Kelly so nice to have a visit on this old poem. I appreciate your encouraging words , thanks a lot!
Date: 3/8/2016 10:04:00 AM
You did melt her heart.. Hope to celebrate with you soon..From Seeley Dr.
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/8/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Mom back Fiday morning will call you.
Date: 3/6/2016 12:52:00 AM
John Derek this is beautiful, you melted my heart, wonderfully penned, and I am loving this 7~
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/8/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Constance for your nice comment.
Date: 3/1/2016 12:19:00 PM
time to plan a vacation together...
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/2/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Tim, but this was from long ago before we were married, now we are celebrating 21 years of happy marrige. Thanks for your visit. John
Date: 3/1/2016 9:58:00 AM
This is a very romantic plea, and would be hard to ignore. Nicely done, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/2/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Lin

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