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Melting Moments Frozen In Time

I sit here alone on these jagged sea washed rocks the seagulls squawk picking at left over food scraps left in the sand smells from the hot dog vendor up on the pier fill the salty air the brisk breeze blows softly like your warm breath in my hair melting moments frozen in time a time when we walked this very beach holding hands and holding hearts a time when we frolicked in the surf we'd never be apart soft kisses and long gazes into your deep loving soul long talks and soft touches love beginning to take hold I close my eyes and remember remember a time a time running my hands through your soft flowing hazel hair oh how it made my fears disappear I remember and now I wish I wish and I hope we can be one again Come place your hand upon my beating chest feel my unspoken words and let our instincts do the rest

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Date: 10/20/2015 11:13:00 AM
Tim, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/17/2015 1:17:00 PM
A pleasant poem - well done for your win, Tim. Julia, :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/17/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Julia
Date: 7/28/2015 7:50:00 PM
Very nice. You took what could have been cliches, but you turned them on their ear. Wish I could do that.
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Date: 7/8/2015 5:05:00 PM
Great verse mate, you let the love flow. Cheers Mate
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful visual, Tim and tender summer love story.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:12:00 PM
Beautiful Tim. The visuals are just wonderful. I could smell the hot dogs and salty air. So romantic but sad. I wish you could walk together once more. Well done. a 7. Best wishes. Pete. Loved it..
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Date: 7/6/2015 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful! You brought us to the beach.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/6/2015 11:54:00 AM
It is a beautiful place to be...thanks Richard
Date: 7/5/2015 3:49:00 PM
Beautiful is just not enough.7
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan
Date: 7/5/2015 3:37:00 PM
No words to describe the beauty of your poem..You made me smell,feel and taste the moment.So many exquisite lines,Cant choose which one I love most..Guess the frolic and surf one..To my fvs..Charma
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Charma. Some moments you just don't wish to forget. Big hugs
Date: 7/5/2015 2:16:00 PM
- It makes me feel to cry ..... a beautiful time is over, and it is missed - Touching and beautiful, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks A-L.....have a great week
Date: 7/5/2015 1:15:00 PM
Tim, oh how beautifully penned and full of love, deep and passionate 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, I was amazed it was potd
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/6/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Constance. Your poem was well deserving of that honor.

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