Melting Moments Frozen In Time

I sit here alone on these jagged sea washed rocks the seagulls squawk picking at left over food scraps left in the sand smells from the hot dog vendor up on the pier fill the salty air the brisk breeze blows softly like your warm breath in my hair melting moments frozen in time a time when we walked this very beach holding hands and holding hearts a time when we frolicked in the surf we'd never be apart soft kisses and long gazes into your deep loving soul long talks and soft touches love beginning to take hold I close my eyes and remember remember a time a time running my hands through your soft flowing hazel hair oh how it made my fears disappear I remember and now I wish I wish and I hope we can be one again Come place your hand upon my beating chest feel my unspoken words and let our instincts do the rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 20, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Tim, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
Ward Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:17 PM
A pleasant poem - well done for your win, Tim. Julia, :)
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Julia
Rotman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Very nice. You took what could have been cliches, but you turned them on their ear. Wish I could do that.
Fairbrother Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Great verse mate, you let the love flow. Cheers Mate
Sergi Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Beautiful visual, Tim and tender summer love story.
Dome Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful Tim. The visuals are just wonderful. I could smell the hot dogs and salty air. So romantic but sad. I wish you could walk together once more. Well done. a 7. Best wishes. Pete. Loved it..
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful! You brought us to the beach.
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:54 AM
It is a beautiful place to be...thanks Richard
Cervenka Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Beautiful is just not enough.7
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Thank you very much Jan
Chircop Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 3:37 PM
No words to describe the beauty of your poem..You made me smell,feel and taste the moment.So many exquisite lines,Cant choose which one I love most..Guess the frolic and surf one..To my fvs..Charma
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Thanks Charma. Some moments you just don't wish to forget. Big hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:16 PM
- It makes me feel to cry ..... a beautiful time is over, and it is missed - Touching and beautiful, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Thanks A-L.....have a great week
La France Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Tim, oh how beautifully penned and full of love, deep and passionate 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, I was amazed it was potd
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Constance. Your poem was well deserving of that honor.
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