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Melting Moments

early spring growth shiver in a march frost… tears fall in sunshine © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/30/2021 4:16:00 PM

A beautiful haiku, harry. I'm so ready for Spring :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/27/2021 8:50:00 AM

I give this a WOW, Harry, as it reads to me two ways. One, nature tears by frost melting. Two, we may weep for the frozen losses of nature. Some yrs here, there is frost, snow in April.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2021 8:39:00 AM

I hope they were not frozen tears. Enjoyed reading your work. Did the tears melt a hard that was frozen with emotion. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2021 6:20:00 AM

Great title for a great ku!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/16/2021 3:42:00 PM

Harry....Your work is much deeper than the roots of the plants! Your heart flows with your pen!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2021 8:47:00 AM

Such a pretty poem, such a sentimental message, Like it a great deal Harry my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2021 5:54:00 AM

Sometimes when the tears need to fall, they fall regardless of the season or time of day. How precious three lines can be when they come from a poet like you who can express so much tenderness, thank you for the moment dear poet friend, sending blessings, and hope for a better world, xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:52:00 PM

I love this, Harry. A real gem.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 6:48:00 AM

superb imagery Harry:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2021 5:47:00 AM

Beautiful, Harry~~tears fall in sunshine.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 3:54:00 AM

That's just what a gardener need. Frost in March. Great haiku. ~~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 2:47:00 AM

Those late frosts catch out many gardeners, love the image Harry. Tom

Judy Ball

Date: 1/14/2021 12:56:00 AM

And from those snowy tears come the spring flowers. You paint a beautiful picture here Harry. Love it. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2021 12:53:00 AM

- When spring comes ... beautiful, Harry ... now we have a thick layer of ice and cold wind ... a winter we have not had in 10 years :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)