Meltdown

The room was on fire Like the howling wind She engulfed me Blazing green eyes Burnt through my soul Melting in her arms Lost all my reason To be One hour One night One minute She was gone Once again Breaking through the ice Looking for my reason To be

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/24/2013 8:51:00 AM

Wow! That was some meltdown. I have no secret for longevity. Just live and let live. Love, joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2013 11:36:00 AM

Good after noon Richard, I like the way she engulfed you. wow, what meltdown, and all in one minute it all up and leaves. I do like the verse. the break of the ice... thought.... LUV~ LInda

Richard Ferry
Date: 6/22/2013 11:49:00 AM

Been awhile..As always good to hear from you...What color are your eyes?Mine used to be hazel but have recently become black..My thought Have you ever fallen through the ice....