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Melt Away

Kiss me with passion so I can savor the taste of your melting pot

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De R

Date: 8/28/2010 9:36:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful poem being featured this week. Emily

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2010 8:18:00 AM

HI WILMA,GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2010 8:16:00 AM

hello Willma, stopping by to say congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/25/2010 11:05:00 AM

congrats on your feature!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2010 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Wilma. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/23/2010 5:52:00 AM

congrats on the featured poem this week! well written and witty!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2010 7:47:00 PM

Wilma, Congratulations on this wonderful Senryu being featured. It is just delightful and I am so glad I got to read it. (I am still smiling) Aloha, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/22/2010 4:33:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all and a winning poem.. yeah.. with luv..ciao..

James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2010 8:02:00 AM

Oo I so love this Senyru Wilma, I'm melting reading it >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/17/2010 6:16:00 AM

Hey Wilma! Wat 'n passievolle Senryu! Dankie vir jou altyd sulke kommentaar! Ek het onlangs besig was en het nie so baie tyd om kommentaar te lewer op Soup...Ek hoop jy het 'n mooi en rustige Sondag en Maandag! ....All the best and take care!...Gert:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2010 12:15:00 PM

Hot Hot Hot Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Wilma. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/16/2010 10:24:00 AM

oh so passionate!!

De R

Date: 8/16/2010 8:01:00 AM

Nice Senryu my friend Wilma:) I can see your heart is filled with passion. Emily

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2010 7:07:00 AM

Where did you find this man, Wilma? I'd like to melt with his kisses too. LOL Very nice senryu! Love, Carolyn