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Melodies of My Youth

soundtracks of my youth
lyrical triggers hypnotic
deeply etched in my heart
drift the melodies of memories



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on July 26, 2020 for contest FOUR LINES sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Back with congrats on your #1 win in Constance's contest, Line. Checking all the boxes, poetically, your four lines are a real treat. Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated ~
La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and love your image too _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Thank for the wonderful compliment, Constance. Most appreciated.
Kerr Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:53 PM
Concise intelligent work, Line. Evocative. Howard
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Thanks, Howard. Most appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Congrats on the fantastic win, Line. It's so fun seeing short poems!
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated ~
Proxenos Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 11:32 AM
A wonderful write Line and many congrats on your wonderful win - for me, music is the essence of life and the soul. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 11:24 AM
There is sound science in these eloquent lines. Congratulations for your top win, xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated ~
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Splendid vocabulary in this write--BIG congrats Line on your first place win.
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Thanks, Vijay, much appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 1:58 PM
music can evoke such memories Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated ~
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 1:18 PM
I love the rhythmic memories of young years. This is so soothing Line. Congratulations on your win! :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Aditi. Much appreciated ~
Deepa Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Each lines drifts beautiful memories line mam:-) Congratulations on your top win:-) Keep inspiring.Best wishes~Deepa:-)
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you very much, V.
Watt Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Line, melodies and memories go hand in hand for me as well. Loved every line of this brief, but touching vignette. Love the artwork, too. Well-deserved congrats on your win ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Hamilton Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Congrats Line on a fine write and win!
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thank you very much, John ~
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July 28, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Those old songs can bring back both the joy and pain of past experiences. I especially like the line "lyrical triggers hypnotic" as this is how I feel when I hear these songs. An extraordinary write, Line. Congrats on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Most appreciated, Carolyn. Thank you ~
Logan Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 4:27 AM
Congratulations on your entry being honored, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Thanks, Jenna.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 3:08 AM
- Four lovely melodies of memories lines, Line ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated ~
Mcguire Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 6:43 PM
And oh how those songs put us right back to that place in time! Great Poem!
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, Timothy. So true ~
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Beautifully penned Line.. Good luck..
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Thank you, Jenish ~
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:01 PM
I think that you've checked all of Constance's boxes here: Beautiful, deep, dark -- Triple check! And, without the contest, it's a great write as well. Superb entry, Line! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:41 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated ~
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