Melodic Voice

Melodic voice


I heard her
melodic voice
   this morning
as the sun rose
   and my heart
    felt the
dawning of
    perfect harmony

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Beautiful, every day should start out this way.
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June 21, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Thanks so much Robert. I'm glad you liked this.
Conte Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 4:43 AM
A cheery song I can relate to. You uplift me; thank you!
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June 20, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Thank you so very much Ashley
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June 17, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Beautiful start to a morning.
Green Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth.
Pran Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Some simple word can create a real lovely atmosphere and touch some one's heart. Have a nice day. Ali Pran
Green Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts
Coreggia Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 9:25 AM
I found it remarkable how you conveyed the most beautiful expression of love in such a few simple words:) Amitiés
Green Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this little love poem so much.
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 6:24 PM
This would be a perfect verse for a greetings card Chris - so uplifting:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thank you Jan.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 4:03 PM
How lovely Chris! I heard the most beautiful bird songs this morning. I can tell they are happy that summer has arrived. It has been raining off and on this past week. We love the rain here it is warm and makes all the flowers bloom. Have a great day! : )
Green Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Thanks you so very much Commie. That sounds like a beautiful start to the day.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 10:14 PM
A beautiful wake up call!
Green Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thanks so much Kim.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:52 PM
- A lovely melodic voice in the morning, Chris :) - The last few weeks I just hear rain dripping on the roof - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I hope the sun finds you soon.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 10:17 AM
A voice we all like to hear dear, Chris! Wonderfully written! I am back!
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your visit and am happy you are back.
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Wonderful imagery in such a few lines Chris.I agree with Akkina, Why aren't we seeing poems like this getting POTD??
Williams Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 3:47 AM
Hi Chris, referring to my comment above, I'm so happy that you and Heidi got POTD for your collaboration of 'Patiently Waiting' Congrats and well deserved...Maria :)
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thank you Maria. Your kindness is always a gift to me.
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Oh, I hear another Tim Smith in your writes... Bravo, Chris...
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thanks so much Eve.
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June 12, 2017 at 9:10 PM
This should be the POTD. Great combo in the morning. Fabulous write, Chris, I love it... hugs :)
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thanks so very much Kina for always showing such kindness to me.
Ella Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Music and the sunrise in your words make a beautiful poem <3 This is sweet and lovely, Chris :)
Green Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much Sara. :)
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:31 PM
I swear you should do cards, Chris! Good morning to you!
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Perhaps, I always seem to have an ace up my sleeve. :) Thanks so much Rick.
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June 12, 2017 at 3:08 PM
how you uplift with this beautiful rhapsody, chris!..good day and huggs
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thank you so much Nette.
Ricci Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:02 PM
Hello Chris. How very beautiful. I love the gentleness and love that radiates through. Your entry proves poetry does not have to be of length for this is a perfect jewel. Honestly. Always is it an honor turning to your page. Well done completely and entirely. Enjoy the afternoon. -- s m i l e --
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much Lisa. I am thrilled you stopped by this morning and left such nice thoughts for me. I appreciate you my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Great little poem, I love any reference to music, nice way to start the day, thanks for this little gem Chris!
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so very much John.
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June 12, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Elegant simplicity this poem be, Chris. A short beautiful walk in the park of your romantic mind. Lovely poem. Much love and more love to you and yours.
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Freddie for always being so kind to me.
White Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Fantastic compact my friend. Packed with loving images again. Melodic harmony, musical little poem :)
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Warrior Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 10:56 AM
A maiden's voice will do it all the time...should wear ear plugs next time lol...beautifully said in a short verse...hope all is good Chris...god bless...^WW^
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so much WW. I am glad you liked this one.
Y. Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Hi Chris Good morning, What a beautiful and harmonious write you have created. And I really enjoyed it very much:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Good morning Alexis. Thank you so much my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this little poem.
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Have a wonderful morning...that Texas heat has made its way up here. If you need me I'll be by the pool.
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Have fun my friend. Thanks so much Tim.
Daniel Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Good morning, Chris, a nice harmonic write:)
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thanks so very much Jo.
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Such a nice morning with perfect harmony. Good morning :)
Green Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Good morning Heidi. Thank you so much.
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