Mellifluous Autumn

Apples ripen pink, hotly blushing,
though the ardent yellow sun grows faint;
blackbirds sucking soft honeyed sweetness.
like babies at breast, show no restraint.

Mellow ripeness splays rich-toned color;
the trees raise scarlet armed applause.
Red-brown and gray, small creatures hurry
stowing provisions for winter's pause.

Copyright, September 1, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:18 PM
WOW, how did this one miss out on top three? It's utterly gorgeous imagery, such clever original ways to say things. Congrats and another fave for me.
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October 10, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Hi Faye, Well, that was action packed, full of dramatic images and powerful. Very nice write. Very nice win. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Have an exubrious mellifluous day. (Don't bother looking up exubrious. It's not in the dictionary.) but have a great day. Take care. Earl
Lindley Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Excellent write.. Congrats on your win my friend!!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 7:44 PM
I'm happy to read this beautiful poem again. Congratulations on your win Faye.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:35 PM
many congrats on your win in my contest with this Colourful entry
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:58 AM
A huge Congratulation. You had won long before the results were posted.
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:56 AM
WOW Faye I love this piece. I have to fav this little gem.
Chutani Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Faye lovely quatrains on autumn. congrats.
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Faye, congratulations on your win for your lovely autumn poem! Sandra
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:21 AM
- A lovely 4 st place,Faye - Congrats with your winning poem in the contest: "Autumn Colours" - The summer is over, it disappeared just as quickly as it came :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:22 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) hugs jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:16 AM
A sweet smooth read. Words that rest so pleasantly before my eyes. Enjoy your Autumn as it looks like you will.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 12:11 PM
What a beautiful poem Faye. Your magic been displayed again. You have such a beautiful pen.
Nance Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Oh you are so descriptive with you colors, you make everything so vivid to the imagination! :) hugs
Gorelick Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Wonderful! I love the line about trees raising their arms in applause. BG
Manassian Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Lovely, Faye. I love how your thoughts go from line to line....not pauses. Sweet flowing and the pictures you paint...sweet! hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 11:44 AM
I just love this. If it is for a contest you should win. It's awesome. God bless you and happy writing. Love and Prayers, Gina
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 11:32 AM
stunning Faye I can picture these images in my mind so clearly:-) good luck in the contest hugs Jan xx
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