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Melissa the Vampire

Melissa The Vampire Melissa is a vampire They say she is a disgrace. She never brushes her hair Or puts make up on her face. But Melissa has a problem; A handicap you will agree. When she looks in a mirror, Her reflection she cannot see. Barry Stebbings 24/10/16

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/8/2016 9:19:00 AM

This is quite clever and witty Barry; enjoyed!:)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/9/2016 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl, pleased you enjoyed it. Barry.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2016 11:11:00 AM

:) Laughed at this witty poem! No woman can put makeup on without a mirror and this is a genuine handicap for poor Melissa. Some of us just choose not to look at our reflections. LOL

Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/26/2016 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. Pleased you enjoyed it. Barry.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/25/2016 1:47:00 PM

Too cute Barry. Loved this. Wonderful rhythm and rhyme. God Bless, JB

Barry Stebbings
Date: 10/26/2016 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Welcome back to PS. Barry