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Melancholy Unsayable

When summer falls away, I find myself beneath a bending willow tree. Inside myself, I'm weeping along with it as its supple limbs tremble in September's wind. A harvest moon appears as if to mock the sun, a sun which not so long ago had shone profoundly. The willow's branches sweep the shadows of fleeting days. I shiver in the gloaming. Nov. 24, 2017

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Date: 11/30/2020 2:21:00 PM
Many images of melancholy you have utilized in your eight lines - the willow, the end of summer, the wind, the moon, the shadows, the gloaming. Beautifully sad, my friend.
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Date: 3/23/2018 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea - keep up the great work! :-) <3
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Date: 3/21/2018 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. The imagery is wonderful.
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Date: 3/21/2018 12:13:00 AM
Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:10:00 PM
I love this line: I sway beneath a bending willow. Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2018 3:45:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Andrea, can't believe i missed reading this gem before, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2018 11:08:00 AM
How lovely Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:51:00 AM
Very beautiful imagery in your poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Andrea.
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:37:00 AM
Sooo lovely, Andrea! CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:19:00 AM
I adore this lovely write Andrea, which gets more beautiful with every read.. A Fave! Congratulations on another excellent win with this fantastic poem!! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/8/2018 12:05:00 AM
This is without any doubt beautiful write
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:58:00 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Andrea, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 6:44:00 PM
Congrats on your solid win, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 1/6/2018 12:43:00 PM
I somehow missed this one Andrea. It is so lovely! Congratulations. I am happy to be on the winner's list with you! : )
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Date: 1/6/2018 8:58:00 AM
This is stunning imagery Andrea, congrats on another winning write!
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:03:00 PM
Andrea, returning with another round of congratulations for your top placement in the contest with this great write.
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations,Andrea, this was a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:15:00 AM
Just beautiful! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 12/4/2017 5:20:00 AM
beautiful and profound sweet Andrea....thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 12/4/2017 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations,Andrea on your win and first placement.
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Date: 12/2/2017 11:07:00 PM
YES. Though you make S.A.D. sound so beautiful ;) xo!
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Date: 12/2/2017 11:26:00 AM
Love the line "sweeping the shadows of fleeting days." Beautiful from start to finish. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/2/2017 1:49:00 AM
These lines: "sweeping the shadows of fleeting days. A harvest moon appears as if to mock the sun," are my favorites. Congrats on your win.
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