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Melancholy Memory

Distant memory of a fading twilight, a winter afternoon so vivid. outside your cabin a jasmine in full bloom and inside...dripping blood, your pale face. one by one your words, those last words you could speak a whisper in my ears "Grow up son!" I have grown up Dad, from that very moment I can tread on sorrow, look at me. But every twilight, before it fades away whisper softly to me your last words. =========000=========

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/26/2013 11:13:00 AM
soupmail.
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Date: 6/9/2013 8:40:00 AM
come out, kash.. fever gone?.. take acre...:) huggs
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Date: 6/8/2013 7:39:00 PM
Extremely beautiful.You are truely gifted dear friend
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:12:00 AM
This poem deserves to win. Congrats. Very well crafted
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:52:00 PM
yessss!..congrats on your stunning win, kashi!... are you with the CIA now, MIA... miss ya!.:) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:45:00 PM
Kash, a nice winning poem. *Congratulations in Constance "Melancholy Memory" contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:32:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved placement. AO
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:50:00 PM
good poem
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:40:00 PM
congrats on your fine win, kash... wake up!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:58:00 PM
So very sad. Congratulations on a very touching poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:36:00 PM
So glad to see this has made the winners list!! It deserves to be here!!
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Date: 6/2/2013 11:23:00 AM
wsdtjszx iwe... hello?.. :) huggs!
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:30:00 AM
yoohoo, kashi bud... where art thou?... salaam!..;) huggs
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Date: 5/29/2013 9:36:00 PM
Hey, Kash, how are you?
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:31:00 PM
kashi!... are you keeoing your new ones in shelf?.. miss your ditties... thanks for visiting me.. miss ya, bud!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:50:00 PM
I'm so glad I didn't miss this, although so painfully filled with emotions of the worst kind. It touches deeply, deep into the heart of the reader, without the usual sentimentality that often hampers the depth and truth. This is a stunning poem, Kash!
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Date: 5/27/2013 10:20:00 AM
Dear Kash, Words to cry by. 'Look at me' is somehow brilliant in the context of your wonderful poem. I'm a little mixed up on 'tread on sorrow' - it brought to mind a couple of things. You are such a good poet. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/26/2013 5:23:00 PM
a wealth of feelings in this ty for sharing Linda
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Date: 5/25/2013 6:31:00 PM
looking forward to your next magnum opus... : huggs, kashi
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Date: 5/24/2013 12:39:00 AM
Oh gosh Kash this is so sad and you have made us feel it, I am so sorry xx
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Date: 5/23/2013 1:43:00 PM
re-reading this till i wait eagerly for the next one, buddy!...:) huggs!
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Date: 5/23/2013 10:11:00 AM
this is so sad, was he truly bleeding? I remember you told me how sad it was for you when he died. Constance will get the sorrow easily from this lovely poetry.
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Date: 5/22/2013 12:18:00 PM
dazzling , dazzling ... lovely sentiments scribed in a flawless manner, kashi bud!...yesss to this!.. i posted a new one..:)
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Date: 5/21/2013 5:43:00 PM
Kash, you just get better and better. Im sorry for your loss, but you write so beautifully about it. BG
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Date: 5/21/2013 5:30:00 PM
You surely have crafted an incredible and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful image you have painted with your words, Great Work!!
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