Melancholy

melancholy concealed in shadows neath weeping willows posted on June 27, 2019

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2019 9:04:00 AM

Sounds like great wording for the beginning of a gothic novel!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/28/2019 9:05:00 AM

LOL we can partner on that one, Kim.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/28/2019 4:54:00 AM

The weeping willow keeps secrets, I do believe. I have planted one in the yard of all three houses we have built because I always need one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/28/2019 5:36:00 AM

I love them too, Caren.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/28/2019 1:10:00 AM

Cealed underneath these branches that fall and droop so mysteriously can be a multitude of humanity's feelings, thoughts and concerns, the tree seems to protect any and all from any ill. I love your weeping willow Haiku's Line. Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/28/2019 5:36:00 AM

They are sacred. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2019 1:06:00 AM

Beautiful, line

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/28/2019 5:37:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.