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Mel-Low Brooks At 96

mel ...flows low waters still... brooks ...in valley pastures... spring waters ...to ponds and back... have carried ...creations for ninety six years... stans sand

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Date: 6/3/2022 9:55:00 AM
An excellent play on M.Brooks name that creates a clever counterpoint of the director & a scene in nature.
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Date: 6/2/2022 6:31:00 AM
No mellow reaction from me to this feat of poetry and its flowing exploration, which I found elegant in metaphor, streaming in imagistsong. Thanks for this bright, first read of my day. Blessings and hugs…long time no see, I’ve been off preparing for shoulder replacement next week. xo sally
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