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Megashow

MEGASHOW With the day falling Like it often does To sun’s orange-red desires Veins of mnemonic thoughts Finding expression In clusters of speechless stars Configuring thoughts And bodies and speech Toward the love-lorn moon Holding the dampness of the sky And craving the urgency of rain Caught in a tremulous dance Throbbing, probing Gripping, slipping Sing-song banging Into another Big Bang The megashow goes on and on Ringing..singing..brimming.. For Nette's "Soft sensuality"contest S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 24 sept 11

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Date: 9/28/2011 8:24:00 PM
hah... you just gave me an idea for a contest! "Write a poem with the word 'mnemonic' in it... k, goin' back to read the rest, hang on... man, have you been reading netteski or has she been reading you? this is a great poem, imo (one of six billion on the planet), Namaste~N
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Date: 9/28/2011 12:03:00 AM
oh, I see you won with this recently. Way to go, S!!
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congrats Jag on another great win with fantastic entry of dynamic words of expression luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:18:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality" contest, congratulations Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, S.Nair
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:49:00 PM
Cool phrase there, the megashow of life. Yes,it is good that it goes on, and I hope it always will. It was nice finding this one among your treasure trove of poetry!
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:11:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day S. Love, Carol
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