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He wears his frame with dignity. Moves amongst the throng with confidence, with a buoyant outlook that defies everything malignant. He magnifies his letters until they are neon bright and shining messages for his eyes alone And augments sound until each letter thrills like a breathless poem, spoken for his ears alone. Can he see right through the covert messages people send through thick air like fog suffocating? (We think he cannot, we think he fails, we think he doesn't see the labyrinthine manipulations people use for information and interaction.) Can he hear those hidden connotations of words? (We think he cannot, we think he fails, we think he hears only one track of a multitrack tape.) He rides his chair with poise, loves with afflatus, with fire, animus and anima. And leaves behind what cannot be carried into the present. But finds in the past a strength to fight and avenge, not revenge. Find justice for those denied in the past and today. He smiles, smile with him, and meet him halfway, he is new. *** March 15, 2017 N/A in contest: Broken Wing Sponsor: Frank Herrera

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Date: 3/17/2017 9:25:00 AM
Your creative impulse is truly inspirational. You bring our collective unconscious to the forth and '*ride' it with poise, kindness, and hope. You truly light the way for many on your steed Darren:) Amitiés (*instead of deriding it)
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 9:29:00 AM
Anne-Marie, thank you so much for the wonderful comments you write to me. That is truly fantastic :) Salut!
Date: 3/17/2017 12:02:00 AM
Sorry I meant steed
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Date: 3/16/2017 11:59:00 PM
Brave Knight, you ride your silver stead like no other, adhering to the code of honor of keeping your Faith and eschewing unfairness and meanness in true Darren style. Brilliant Poem
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 12:48:00 AM
Yes! You get it :) And thank you so much for the compliment :)
Date: 3/15/2017 7:38:00 AM
What an excellent powerful poem Darren. I love the ending! Those last 3 lines are so important. :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 8:18:00 AM
Heidi, they are indeed. Thank you!
Date: 3/15/2017 4:46:00 AM
Darren Darren Darren. Good Morning. What can be said for this. Allow me to tell you. Wear the frame with pride. Ride the chair with strength. If you can see that and be that then all will be seen new and all will be new. I can't explain it properly but this is true. Trust me and know in your heart. The newness starts with you. This entry Darren is most beautiful and yes most emotional too. So well done entirely.......
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 4:51:00 AM
Buongiorno Lisa :) I wear my frame as if I am a knight in shining armor. Thank you so very much, I understand exactly what you are trying to say.

Book: Shattered Sighs